adam_redleaf

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2021-04-15 Joined Global
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adam_redleaf
adam_redleaf
2 months ago
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My vote is to leave as soon as Luci gets her year 2 powers, having rose graduate at the end of year 1, and all the horcruxes should be hunted down before quirellmort goes for the stone, then when he dies voldemort goes too

adam_redleaf
adam_redleaf
4 months ago
Commented

If you have the next chapter already written for patreon, I don't think your subscribers would mind you posting it here before you have the one after ready to post there.

adam_redleaf
adam_redleaf
5 months ago
Commented

Thanks for the chapter. Will Daughter of God be returning soon?

adam_redleaf
adam_redleaf
5 months ago
Replied to nullvoidz

I imagined Talia either forgot or that unlocks at level 100. On remnant, it is a basic chant to unlock their aura because it is the blessing from one or both of the brother gods, which are the creator gods of remnant. For her mates, she needs to add the blessing before she can unlock their aura. Author, feel free to use this explanation if you need to give one for why she didn't do the chant yet.

adam_redleaf
adam_redleaf
5 months ago
Replied to adam_redleaf

If you go with cultivator either as soon as the class is chosen or when she receives her first dao, the subcategories under her fairy and kitsune classes should be converted to daos of those concepts leveled to what you think her expertise should be. I would recommend that the level be no more than the total levels she has gained since getting the fairy and kitsune classes.

adam_redleaf
adam_redleaf
5 months ago
Commented

Cultivator: While most cultivation stories are obsessed with physical violence and martial arts I prefer the ones that suggest there are countless paths which may lead to the peak because this allows the cultivation to improve whatever Talia specializes in, rather than just making her a better combatant. Every X levels, in addition to adding cultivation, may also include something like dao of ________, could offer knowledge/power over things like formations, crafting, elements, illusions, spacetime, and pretty much anything else, if you want to throw in something random/seemingly useless you could give the dao of cheese or some other food. At the peak, any dao offers conceptual level manipulation of whatever its _______ is, so I'd set all daos to have something like 10,000+ levels and just be a new category that levels get added into, she can also maybe develop them herself through compression or however cultivation is supposed to work. Crafter/Artificer: Levels improve the ability to design and produce armor, weapons, tech, enchantments, crafts, and any other category of artifact. Every X levels gives designs, materials, or both, which are perfectly suited to Talia and her mates. Alternatively, every X levels gives a crafting method from a different universe.

adam_redleaf
adam_redleaf
5 months ago
Commented

Does this mean you will be bringing Travels of the daughter of God back from hiatus soon?

adam_redleaf
adam_redleaf
8 months ago
Commented

Please just repost what you already had posted. I appreciate splitting the stories, but I don't think you need to make any changes unless you're taking this time to edit parts you consider mistakes.

adam_redleaf
adam_redleaf
8 months ago
Commented

Yes, wrap up this arc and return to Marvel, but you clearly wanted him to get something from this world, so don't leave without whatever it is. I'd guess it is the skills he has been given and the material he created, maybe the stats (if they affect the real world) and companions who want to come with.

adam_redleaf
adam_redleaf
9 months ago
Commented

i appreciate that you don't want to drop this story, but I would much rather read a story you enjoy writing, so I think it would be OK to switch stories, not dropping this one but putting it on the back burner to update only when you feel like it.