This fanfiction is pretty good, there are a few grammar mistakes here and there but this based upon the HunterxHunter world so it’s completly acceptable because this story was written perfectly! I love the MCs personality by the way.
The MC may be, I dont remember writing this
"Look, you can't even control yourself. You ended up hurting her. How foolish can you be?" Byakuya clicked his tongue in disapproval. His words left me confused. Was...was he concerned about the fact that I got hurt? Yeah, right. He just wanted to taunt the guy even more.
Video Games · MychemicalAce
I see you like both HxH and BNHA. The story is fantastic so far, and will likely become better as it goes on! Keep on being great! (As a writer, I can deeply relate to the way this was written!)
MHA: Bungee Gum
Anime & Comics · Chopstiksman