First, thank you for having read both fanfics, and for finding positives in Beyond Blue. Honestly, thank you for showing your appreciation and I’d like to give you fully fleshed out response. For me, the writer’s block comes from the abysmal ending of the manga, and trying to envision a "proper" ending without completely derailing from the story. I have the same issue every time I try to write a fanfic for Major, the baseball anime. The ending frustrates me to the point of…not even being able to properly describe what I am feeling. I do acknowledge the part about the protagonist being a fully experienced player. Over the course of writing this Persona fanfic, I've come to better understanding of my writing style specifically how I characterize my protagonist. By nature, I am rarely if ever impulsive, reckless, are all that passionate. I’m often described as calm, meticulous, and calculated. I believe that my own personality bleeds too deeply into my protagonist, and it becomes a form of mental gymnastics to characterize a fictional character while psychoanalyzing myself…If that makes any sense. A separation needs to be made between how I as the author view the world, and how the character views the world. That being said, I would love to hear any new ideas you may have. Again, thank you for you taking time out of your day to read these fanfics, and even leave a comment. It means the world to me. Sorry for rambling.
Lightsword, essentially Qui-Gon Jinn's lightsaber, but a darker color
He could forcefully extend the length of his first lightsword as a way to imitate Kippōshi's Spirit Stab, but that took time and energy. Now, with a single thought, the sword would extend from 2.5 feet to 5 feet. A valuable skill when in melee range. His gun could now shoot farther away. In theory, his targets were either too close or too big to miss, but the idea of pestering Shadows from afar to draw their attention or kiting Shadows to avoid wasting Spirit or Pneuma was too tempting.
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Blaster, but it should be a darker grey
After verifying with Kippōshi that Morgana was asleep, Akira took out the newly purchased gun and hilt. He placed his hands on both and started infusing each with Pneuma. Slowly, both took on darker colors and when the visual changes were complete, Akira stopped. Both were branded with the concept of "range".
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Algorithm 5-star. As the author, I would say that it's an inoffensive fanfic. Give it a read if you have the time, and if you enjoy it keep reading. Thank you.
Glad you like them. I know that many will defend the original codenames and claim that it's a reflection of the inner self. It's not that deep in my opinion. I think they tried to pick names that could be generally understood across cultures.
"So, I'll be guiding you to become the king of thieves, then? Hehe...Then I'll be Merlin! Alright, from here on out, we're Ace, Lieutenant, and Merlin. We need to be absolutely thorough about using those code names from now on!"
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He sluggishly finished his homework and went to bed, but his eyes only closed around 3am.
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Thank you for the support
As if you couldn't be any more of a chess piece in this twisted game. Now you have a forced upon guide to make you play the predetermined game. On my first play through, I thought Morgana would eventually betray me.
{Yeah. I do…There's something about Morgana that feels off. He knows too much for not having memories about his past. How did he even enter and exit the Metaverse? And…how did he get imprisoned when he had a persona and could have used it to escape? What's his real purpose?}
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original Persona: A Shift In Reality
In a twist of fate, a young man from finds himself transmigrated into the body of Akira Kurusu. Struggling to adapt to his new identity, he soon discovers that this isn't just a simple case of waking up in another's shoes; the Metaverse, Palaces, and Personas are all real, and worse he can't awaken the power needed to face these challenges...At least, not without a price16 Chs 171 Collections
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Beyond Blue: Ichijyou Ryuu
A second opportunity to play the game he loves, except it comes at a cost. Torn between what he was and what he is, he'll endeavor to reach the pinnacle of soccer.13 Chs 169 Collections
I'm curious as to what made it more fun. I hear and read tons of praise for P3 and its variants/spinoffs.
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