knightwingh

I have read up to 25 chapters. I felt like the author was rushing for some big reveals, but there is no world building. I guess there would be a character development regarding his hatred towards the guild, but the world building is inconsistent. there is no power scaling, and the guild master directly wants to talk with him. and 50 year old technology is considered ancient. There are no guards. Like a city where the surrounding is infested and he can easily climb the walls and for someone who can increase the strength like 5 times he can easily adapt. i don't mind simple plots but i at least want some depth in either the character or the world

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I agree, the story is so slow, I am about 220 chapters in and the world building is all around the places and the author is trying to explain every single detail. Even now I'm not sure what the actual power of the system. Ever so often it is mentioned that he was doing stuff thanks to him learning smithing but nothing after that. The power leveling is really confusing. The MC has the ability to scan and he can't scan who is very powerful and he has improved the skill by using it continuously, then he forgets about it. The background characters are the worst. The only cuss they can come up with is that he is a peasant, but he became one of the three mvps and that was announced on the first day of the academy. Has no one ever saw it?? The MC is a paragon (can use all the elements of magic ) and it's been 200+ chapters and it is hardly explored. He has a bloodline which is a mystery but his parents have no power. MC has been heavily traumatized in his previous life where he had to obey every single order from is abusive family, but in this world he has no etiquette whatsoever. Not even the basic ones. There is character development all through the 200 plus chapters. The MC wants to have freedom but doesn't understand the responsibilities. He reads a lot but hardly understands it in his world. The MC is genius for creating the cultivation technique but somehow it is also the worst. I really tried reading but the chapters are so slow, the plot is all around the places and MC is dumb. It would have been fine if he was like this in the first 100 chapters, but even after 200+ chapters and that's lazing writing. I would suggest the author to narrow the world building and have a time skip and power up the MC and later explain how he had got those powers.