Greener_ThanGreen

This world must use some very stable isotopes for their bombs if they are still radioactive after 50 000 years.

Is Skia male or female wolf thing? There are both descriptors of him and her mentioned.

How did he control the iron sand and turn it into chains? Did he unlock a bloodline of a Kazekage? Somehow copy Magneto's power? Telekinesis?

He keeps saying he doesn't know how he got powers, but the voice clearly asked for his wishes and explained what was granted. Also, titanium is a terrible material for blades. I think it can't retain an edge or something. Maybe an alloy is better.

This novel started sounding like a translated Chinese novel some time during mission impossible and never got better. Then there is the wrench. Why does mechanic have a legendary artifact and the other jobs don't?

This needs to be edited from chapter 1 to this one. There are spelling errors every 2-3 sentences like felt is always spelled flet and others. Words are substituted wrongly, like instead of compartment, apartment is used and so many more errors that it makes it hard to read.

3 weeks are 21 days, plus the 5 tries before that it equals 26 exp. Points for the skill. Not 35 that ot has. That is an entire week an 2 days more.

You know there are such things as notaries that verify if a document is officially signed? Something this big needs one or he could have just forged the whole thing. He could bribe one, but he still needs it.

Insane characters are best portrayed as mad scientist or mastermind manipulating from the dark. And the most fun ones are super elaborate and complex plans for achieving mundane tasks. Like inventing time travel because you forgot to watch or record your favorite show or go to Woodstock or something.