flirting chapter was a success
"blood"... I knew it!!!
"Tears slowly rolling down" was changed to "Blood tears slowly rolling down!
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Urban · Catch the Star Sheep
I thought... "The ghost's eyes..." or "filled with blood..."
"The girl's eyes were filled with tears as she stood there, the myriad lights of the world behind her, filled with the atmosphere of the mortal world."
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Urban · Catch the Star Sheep
interesting idea for a plot... but what if the protagonist could hear thoughts but they weren't that characters thoughts but what the "system" wanted the protagonist to hear? that would be a good book to read... 📚
Ye Xiao looked at Gu Yan somewhat surprised: "Don't you think you're making a mountain out of a molehill?"
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Urban · Catch the Star Sheep
why is this not in brackets, if Gu Yan was able to hear it????
If Gu Cheng insisted on seeking out Ye Bingtong, then the Gu Family, as an ally, could be given up on. The cooperation between the Ye Family and the Liu Family should be sufficient.
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Urban · Catch the Star Sheep
a few days??? I thought it was 3 years???
The foreshadowing here is unnecessary, the outcome of this situation would surprise the reader more if removed
The girl's curly black hair hid her beautiful blue eyes which were shining like stars sometime ago, but now there was a faint dull expression on them.
Quick Transmigration : I Became a High School Student !!!
Urban · CoffeePrincess
He helped you because he's the teacher???
Author! You wrote it like that on purpose!
romance...
Quick Transmigration : My Bigshot Brothers Dote on Me
Urban · CoffeePrincess