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Anime & Comics · Cedric_7512
Plural is dice. Singular is die
'But it doesn't spell Dice though... it spells DICES. As in plural.'
Video Games · Flame_Claws
He lost abilities without having a choice. His fucking hatsu FORCED him into terrible position. All that to gain nerfed kamui after he had to take out his eye with a knife and it took away two of his abilities or his own hatsu would just walk away.I liked the reworked hatsu, but it was done poorly and left a bad taste in my mouth. Restrictions are part of the nen system, and people expect them. All the author had to do was give him garbage trades for some time and then make him decide to set some restrictions up. Would make sense within the universe and be actually clever. Instead, he was punished for thinking outside the box, which nen system heavily encourages.
Chapter 20 was a huge disappointment. His own hatsu cripples him.I would have been fine with the nerf to his random ability. I would have even liked it, but taking away abilities he already has is stupid. Add on top bodily mutilation and his own ability screwing him over for breaking never established rules.Could have made it so he has beginner's boost for the first few months, and then you go to new monthly pulls.Might change my rating depending on the authors response or drop altogether.
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"A second singles release isn't normal right? I'm not crazy?" Haley asked in a puzzled tone as she thought about the matter.
TV · Alittlepiggy33
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