a great overall experience but repeatative story. main character is the best gets great rewards and gets strong super fast. it was done in a readable and engaging way until he got that seal beast and it was just all the same. so great beginning and middle but sloppy end story. no the last part was ok. I also would go back to her at the end of the day.
if I'm reading everything right then this is impossible to do correctly , because you have to put mana into the egg to tell if it's a certain grade and once you put mana in the egg it's your egg...... so how is this going to work unless he reveals his power?
If he guessed wrong, then, he would sell the eggs at low prices!
Fantasy · Darn You
yeah, I don't think teachers are real ether. just middle-aged blabbering individuals. really, tho fix it or refund
"We don't know whether there are teachers or not, but what is clear is that outer space is truly limitless and anything can happen in it."
Fantasy · Ampas_Tahu
I'm pretty sure it should be death energy, since they are death beast.
Using Life Energy, Vincent Wolf stimulated the two Demon Beasts, and they immediately accelerated again, heading towards another light spot on his phone.
Eastern · Fry Them All
I believe that's the original name, they probably forgot to change it.
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Eastern · Encounter Atop The Celestial Mountain
enjoyed the story, hated the long wait, hoping for a part 2.
is it a trend now to steal a chaper from your readers this is the second in a row to take my chapter pass for nothing. authors used to may these informational pages free. 😮💨
I want my free pass back. You should release a free chaper as compilation.
would have given a better rating if not for the chapters after 600. it seemed like the story was going somewhere it when there, then fell apart. forgetting key points in the story to advance a quick character need. duplicate chapters the say the same thing as the last but with 3 sentences changed. skipping ahead in the story in ways that makes no sense. huge chunks of information missing. I really liked the story but now it's garbage. please fix your story I know you have the skills too you have shown them in earlier chapters.
I hope there's a part 2 , really great story , but I hate open ended storylines that pretty much say and the journey continues
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Urban · Ooty