What happened to Omni-directional movement lv0?
Skills: Cooking LV1, Fighting LV6, Blacksmithing LV5, Brewing LV2....
Anime & Comics · Levaa
Lucy baby, is that you?
The man sitting at the piano, whispered under his breath, "dad?"
TV · Booggie
OMG this line made me turn away and spit blood.
"Lu Benwei actually knows that the weakness of the Spirit Rat is its neck. He's not as simple as he seems to be!"
Urban · 648
The mouth watering and saliva running was a bit too much. It makes him seem insane/psychotic, unless that was what you were going for with his character. Something better would be”his heart raced with excitement, a smile stretched across his face”.
Not only that, but it was siad that he became unwilling to trust people bc of the implied betrayal
I really want to curse you for taking a break. This has become on of my favorite webnovels.
At first I liked the novel, although I found the BT part of the story starting to get annoying past the first 20 something chapters. As I go into later chapters I just couldn’t bring myself to continue reading.
It may have had a slower start than is usual for a webnovel, but as I read I loved it more and more. One way I determine if a webnovel is great is if it make me feel attached or emotional towards the characters. When I got to the parts about Helen I felt like crying. If this novel can keep up this is going to one of my favorites.
Truck-kun, the most deadly assassin in the multiverse.
"Why does that cloud look like a truck?"
Video Games · Niggross
It’s a great story, but the MC makes me so angry and frustrated that I just can’t continue to read it.
Merged Soul: Reincarnated in a Dark World
Sci-fi · Silver_smile