Daoistr2b4NH

The writing feels really amateurish, as if the author doesn’t know where the story is coming from or going. There’s no sense of professionalism at all. How did the MC even know about the Soul Hall and Yao Lao? And Yao Lao doesn’t even question the MC’s intentions? It just doesn’t make sense—had to laugh at how ridiculous that was. Each chapter just gets worse. The author constantly takes the easy way out, ruining any potential for real character growth or story development. What he did with Medusa is honestly a disaster. It’s like he killed off the character and then slapped the same face and powers onto a totally different person. I’ll keep reading a few more chapters just to see where this mess is going, but honestly, I’m not expecting much at this point.

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Before jumping into writing a FanFic novel, it’s really important to read the original novels first. The author didn't include every fine detail, so getting a good grasp of the source material is crucial. It’ll make your story much richer and more authentic!