Just an author-to-author, you need to space after a comma, like I have been doing. When doing thoughts, the single ' is good, but make sure you italicize it. In the Inkstone, you can just highlight what you want, and on the side, it should show the I for Italic.
Well, I started a new GOT fic in third person, so im no longer a chicken :D
As I sit here, upon my majestic iron throne overlooking the empty halls, tapping my crude long fingers against the thrones' sharp edges. Thinking to myself of what I just heard,
TV · scullhaven
sure ill release 1 more
[Totally Not The Author, Don't Believe The Author Tag] Wow, amazing book author! Keep up the great work! I liked the story being about Beyond the Wall and following the interlinkings of Wildings and how they group to survive! My favourite part was chapter *** where he *** and then *** OMG and then there's the scene where it made me cry :( great work author. Nothing can stop you :D
But why, Yoriichi mean Sun God, Fated One? It's literally FreeFolk, names can be whatever they want them to be. That's the whole thing, his mother from Dorne knew of this unique name and following his birth of a second sun gave him the name. LMFAO It worked 100%. It would be weird if it was some other place sure. But I don't think Yoriichi is a bad name and it's his character, especially since most call him Yori. I already tried other names relating to the sun, Apollo, or Ra, but it is what it is
(again he is born, not reborn, with no knowledge or anything from a past life. But if you know Yoriichi it's all good, trust the process)
TV · scullhaven
1. I already wrote how he would get things like valyrian steel sword which is gonna be dope, and even dragon glass knowledge and locations. 2. He is leagues above others yes, but he wouldn't kill people if he didn't need to, Yoriichi is very humane, if he can disable or knock someone down he would choose that over fatal, unless extremely necessary and even then would feel reluctant, he is like spiderman with great power comes great responsibility. 3. Whitewalkers = Demons, he will go demon time on those guys, but just because he leagues above, he is still as weak as a human being, he even said that if muzan hit him once he could die, a lot of the beginning will be wilding vs wildings vs nights watch vs white walkers. I feel like it will be very interesting, and Beyond the wall is a lot of the plot of Jon Snow, who is like the real Protagonist of the show... We already know all the scheme and stuff from so many other fics, that's why I wrote one beyond the wall :D
i think we are talking about the same person, the night king will be born when he is first made, I could have my time mixed up, but I mainly wanted to say that he will have had enough time to be strong enough to fight Yoriichi when the time comes lmao. Yoriichi in my book is born on year 283 of Aegons Callander
2. he has had like 8,000 years to train his swordsmanship to the peak plus superhuman strength equal to or stronger than Yoriichi, vs Sun Breathing, so the battle between him and Yoriichi won't just be an instant one-shot. Otherwise, it is kinda underwhelming, so I simply advanced the Night King's power. A perfect rival/enemy for Yoriichi.
TV · scullhaven
Hey man, me and you both LMFAO. I started one as well two days ago as Wildling too.
GOT: The Ice King
TV · Reyes_II