the story is great and addictive, you did a good job with all the suspense and mystery, I can't wait for the next chapters :)
This redhead is very suspicious, and no, the chapter is not NSFW just two people flirting and kissing briefly, for someone who has read all these chapters so far must have realized that this is a more mature book and maybe the protagonist even has a romantic partner and something between them happens
LOL this is one of my favorite chapters! Ling qingyu and tang ziyi = couple destruction
tang ziyi and ling qingyu flirting gets me a lot, slowburn makes me even more anxious
author ling qingyu will only have yang qingyue as a romantic partner? i'm really confused
I love villains who don't make excuses for their terrible actions, who recognize themselves and chose to do this, in fact I don't think it's even right to say that she's a villain as stated in this capther, she just wants to be the strongest
Villains must have a visible unique characteristic beyond their unpleasant personalities and attitudes
Blackwolf having a gauntlet with claws like Wolverine is cool, now wouldn't a staff be more suitable for Sylvana? Will magic be a thing in this book? If so then a staff would be good, and its main ability could have to do with the thorns you mentioned
maybe not rabbits, but different family members? It would be cool if there was a domestication option and all players could have one, it gives you even more possibilities and ideas as an author
OMG SHE ATEEEE
Magical Marvel (HP X MCU)
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