I really appreciate your comment 😊. I'm experimenting with different writing styles, so I'll be making adjustments to the chapters little by little. I've noted your suggestion about using quotation marks instead of dashes, and I'll definitely implement it to make the reading clearer 📚. Comments like yours are very valuable to me, as they help me improve and grow as a writer. Thank you for your feedback! 👍
—Hey, I didn't know you could fight like that. —Sarah said, giving him an interested, almost amused look. —You really gave Nate what he deserved. Sometimes I wonder why I keep going out with him, he's such a pain...
The Song of a Lost Life
Music & Bands · Daoist6ux6CT
This is, without a doubt, the best Naruto fanfic I've ever read. The arcs and context are perfectly crafted, and the character development is solid and engaging. While some readers complain about the protagonist's decision to let someone special to him die early on, I find it understandable given that he had limited options at that moment. The way jutsus are constructed and the fight scenes are truly impressive, making it easy to get lost in each confrontation thanks to the well-executed details. Additionally, the writing improves significantly after chapter 100, so I highly recommend giving it a chance. Absolutely worth reading!
Ethan isn’t going to box himself into just one music genre. Instead, he’ll specialize in an exciting mix of rock and pop, as we’ve already seen in some of the songs he’s sung. But the best part is that he’ll be open to exploring other styles, so his music will always be a surprise. Also, ready to take suggestions! If there are songs you think fit his vibe or that he’d like to sing in future chapters, let me know! [img=recommend]
"Thank you for your interest and suggestion! Right now, it's still a bit early in the story to decide on adding famous characters. At this point, Ethan is still an unknown character, and I'm focusing on his personal development. But I'll definitely keep ideas like this in mind for the future of the story." [img=recommend]
Yes, I plan to include some famous secondary characters, although they won’t appear regularly. Since it’s an alternate world, their behaviors will be different from who they were or are in real life. This will be explored later in the plot, as I want to add more depth to the backstory. Also, I’m not just including musicians; there will be actors, actresses, directors, and others to enrich the world of the story
Absolutely not, I’m not homophobic. I have an open mind and value diversity. If I made any comments that might have sounded cliché or insensitive, I sincerely apologize, as it wasn’t my intention to offend anyone. By including a homosexual couple in my story, I aimed to bring more inclusion and diversity, and I’m working on giving them more depth and significance as secondary characters later in the plot
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original The Song of a Lost Life
Ethan Graves, a talented but tormented young artist, dies at 41 in Hollywood, in a world where he was never given the opportunities he deserved. His life, marked by struggle and disappointment, culminates in a tragedy that plunges him into darkness, with his terrible luck haunting him until the end. However, an unexpected encounter with his Creator offers him a second chance: to be reborn in an alternative world, a Hollywood where the history of art and music has diverged, and the legends he knew never existed. This time, he will be granted opportunities that were denied to him in his previous life, allowing him to rediscover his passion and innate talent in an environment where he can create his own artistic legacy. "I won’t let the fear of failure overshadow the excitement of pursuing my dreams." —Ethan Graves.12 Chs 137 お気に入り
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Somnia: Realms of Dreams
In the modern world, a university student named Alex, once an avid gym-goer, finds himself spiraling into depression after the loss of his beloved pet. Feeling lost and disconnected from his usual routines, he struggles to find purpose. However, his life takes an unexpected turn when, one night, he falls asleep and wakes up transported to a pseudo-modern, feudal world. This new realm, Somnia, is unlike anything he could have imagined—filled with fantastical monsters, valiant knights, and a mysterious level system that governs abilities and power. As Alex navigates this extraordinary land, he must adapt to its unique challenges and uncover the secrets that bind this world together. With the promise of adventure and the potential to rediscover his strength, Alex embarks on a journey that could redefine his reality and his place within it.3 Chs 0 お気に入り
I have a theory about what might happen if, in the next chapter, Fujin and Jiraiya manage to kill Orochimaru 💀. If this goes down, Sasuke would be left without his main source of power and mentor on his path for revenge. So the big question is: who would Sasuke turn to for more power? 🤔 This is where Fujin, with his alter ego Akuro, comes in 💥. Imagine Akuro recruiting and training him. With his thunder specialty, Fujin could be the perfect mentor for Sasuke, helping him sharpen his skills and making sure he doesn't fall behind Naruto . This way, Fujin wouldn't just be training Sasuke, but also influencing the course of the story, having some "control" over future events…
Naruto : The Wind Calamity
Fantasy · Devil_Hex