Terna_James

So he can buy Anything, you mean anything from the system yet he's still the way he is? He's not OP or even close to anything He had a system that should make him unique but he's not unique? He rented an ability from the system because he could not afford the actual cost of the permanent ability, yet when he got enough points to buy the real ability, he still did not...there were many times he could have escaped dangerous situations with just Teleport ..which cost 3k point....and if that very useful and great ability is like that,surely they'll be others...but no,aside being a very focused villain and wise one,what else do you really have in stored for this book After your over a year break,I thought maybe you'd come back with new flavors and something to look forward to,I even had to restart the book from chapter one just to make sure I am up to date...I am currently in the late 600 chapters and I can say your come back was not positive in the development of this book, Try to use the system more,buy abilities or artifacts that can help the MC be unique... You can make an MC OP without being boring. Thank you

Alright author No Wahala I and other readers are looking forward to the good things you've prepared for us Just know that it's not everyone that's patient enough to wait till chapter 1k+ before they start getting what you promised Just lime you said he'll be OP when he gets to tier two,now you're saying till he leaves the underground which isn't anytime soon.. Also please it's best you don't give him OP abilities than give it to him then he dumps them for example that he's stimulating room ability to stimulate himself that can make him the best version of himself and the forging hall that can make him rich and gather resources... Thank you

Made it to chapter 500+ To be honest,if I had not been really bored I would not have gotten this far,cause at the beginning chapters I dropped this book twice,however as things progressed I had to stick to the book cause it was evolving, the book is a really good read,and I am really happy when I see newbie writers become better at their skills There are some good points going for this book however I am here to drop critiques Before I drop my critique I'll let to let you know that I am proud reader of over 50 books and currently reading 20+ books that are being updated regularly and I have more knowledge and experience than most readers and writers.... 1. It seems you're still undecided for the kind of MC you want,at times he's cold,rational and emotionless but the next he's being too surprised and that breaks the whole picture if him being cool in the first place I really find that annoying, give him a persona...yes surprising things happen but does he have to behave like he hasn't seen surprising things before? 2. You told us he'll be over powered when he gets to tier 2,and all I can see is him not having anything that is unique or that made him OP...instead he got a bloodline although powerful but yet has a progenitor, he got a suit that acts more like a spy than it actually helps him,he got new cool abilities but none made him OP As a matter of fact,the best ability he has that I can remember and you made mention of once was when he met himself in the simulation chamber...do you know what sort of potential that ability had? I'll let you think about that Just know what he's not yet OP as he should be,you'll limiting him I get it that you don't want to make him too OP and make things too easy for him cause it will make the book boring... Yes it would, as a matter of fact I'll be the first to drop this book....but know that there are a lot of ways to make a character OP without destroying a novel,read other books too for more experience.. I can recommend some books if you ask 3. The MC is not actually the MC There are a lot of characters that are quite fit for that role,the MC is not unique, he's wish is just one of four,he's not smart,don't blame it on lack of information, he is a pussy,how can he be scared of the tribulation of hell when that would not just make him more powerful but also other benefits instead he's going for the easy route..like come on!!! I was sincerely hoping he uses that tribulation cause that is better than any infinity stone...those stones can just be additional benefits So author please make the MC better and utilize him well 4. You give details on too many irrelevant things,you waste time on too many things that are irrelevant, we appreciate the work you put into details but that could have been better during the beginning days of the book not when a book is over 500 chapters,now we're bigger boys and girls so just write on and explain only the necessary,some things you explain are not mentioned again and that makes that information useless So please cut us some slack 5. This is more of a suggestion Why not make the MC merge with both progenitor blood,or some very powerful ability that can make him unique or something I have said too much So I'll leave it at that.. Thank you

Since you've put it like that I guess I'll be sticking around then Thank you

Watsup Author?!. Alright I think it's time I drop a review on this book. I went through other reviews and saw some giving positive reviews and I shaked my head cause maybe those readers haven't read a good book before. This book started quite well,the first 100 chapters were OK but it took a downhill when Rey became so obsessed with the wellbeing of his classmates,alright maybe that's like an attachment to keep him in check and not become a killing machine, but does he have to be a simp for them? Dude has an OP ability, tasked with the responsibility of saving the world and he's busy being soft,too soft even. I 100 percent prefer Ater to him,smart, cunning, does what have to be done,has leadership traits and is goal oriented, instead of Rey to learn from him,he's distrusting him and paranoid,we'll I'd be distrustful and paranoid too if I have that kind of subordinate, Ater is perfect for the position of MC...and please don't start by telling me Rey is still a kid,none of those summoned are kids anymore after experiencing deaths. I still have alot say but all in all Rey could be better. You can do better I'll probably not come back to this book again cause I lost interest, you would too if you read the kinds of book I've read(you'll get there) Just adjust for ur future readers or maybe do better on your next work Thank you

Please Author don't tell me you abandoned DARIUS SUPREME?!!!!!! I'VE been waiting for a year now for an update,and to me that seems to be the most interesting book you've written so far(Aside Immortal Simulation, I haven't read that one yet). Please can you continue Darius supreme?

This book is really nice I am enjoying it so far However I'd like to to plead with the author to please make the MC more smarter and more dominant just like Ater or even more,I really get frustrated when he's being too naive,passive and allows his emotions control him. If that can't be done then I plead with you to write a book that gives us a villain that's OP and Smart but suffers(ed) alot too Sometimes I imagine How good this book would be if the MC was actually Ater Thank you

Thank you for your listening ears I appreciate it alot cause this book is a gem in dirt As long as you remain steadfast and open to new things and growth Then this book will reach heights unimaginable I am qualified to say these things because i can beat my chest and say I’ve read over 95% of SYSTEM novel in Webnovel 1. He should be more active than passive in obtaining strength 2. A side character (Raven) is more interesting and Controlling than the MC which shouldn’t be so 3. Clarify if the MC is Villain or Hero or someone who is power Driven and go to any extent to achieve it(good or bad means nothing) 4. What path is the MC on? Thank you and Godfingers