I wonder where this editor is, cause though the story is great the grammer is still a bit f*ck’d
Also in another great news!!!! I got an editor that will make sure everything is neat and perfect! he is currently working on chapters 1-33! This is all thanks to you guys! Thanks for the support!
テレビ · CORNBRINGER
Fair point but this story isn’t one spouting all about p@treon this and support me that. At least in my view putting this kn webnovel allows others who wouldn’t otherwise read this really good story to also have the oppertunity to enjoy it. Sure they should’ve said “hey this is so’n’so’s story and im postting this here for more people to read it” but they also didnt try to make any money off of other people’s work either. So not the best for sure but nowhere near the worst either. 🤷♂️
It was a good raised eyebrow 👍
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House names would be nice here 🤷♂️😔
"And titles," Lord Beesbury reminded them. "The Warden of the South is of House , and the marcher lordships answer to House . Any grant must respect those hierarchies."
本&文学 · TranslatingFanfics
Liking the story but the grammar, mainly using titles without names, like lord ___ or prince ____ , without saying who is being talked about is a fairly immersion breaking issue
ALL PRAISE TRUCK-KUN!!!!! Honestly a fun read. 😁
Yea, bilbow’d deff be a badger
One, Mikel Derrick, was a small, dark-haired boy. The other, Ryan Baggins, was stockier with blonde hair.
本&文学 · BlurryPinkSnake
Wait, what happened to hedwig?
Harry sealed the parchment, then attached it to an owl perched on the windowsill — an owl Sirius had gifted him before Harry took Swedish citizenship.
映画 · Beuwulf
Did we lose a chap somewhere?🤷♂️
The fight between Ayr and Rocks D. Xebec was set for the next day.
アニメ&漫画 · Oreski
If the rebelion happened 15 years ago and he’s eighteen then he was three years old, not eight or nine
"Viserys might not have known the full truth," Hermione said gently. "He was young during the rebellion. Eight or nine years old. He might have been told a sanitized version of events by Ser Willem or others trying to protect him. Or he might have created his own version to cope with the trauma."
Blood of the Dragon, Magic of the Phoenix
本&文学 · VRUniverse