Minos222

I’ve read up to chapter 80 or so, so I can’t speak for the story afterwards. This novel is among many novels heavily inspired by “The Novel’s Extra”. If your familiar with these novels, you’ll know that these stories often have many similarities in the story outline (most particularly in the beginning) with most differences coming from their execution. So I won’t be talking about repetitive plot, but instead what I felt about their execution. I always thought that discriminating against someone for their weapon was typically too heavy handed. But no, he was hated because he was an actual asshole. Understandable. The MC and other characters felt real both as individual characters and how they interacted. There are some spelling and grammar issues, but nothing too noticeable. I liked how the surprise in the story didn’t feel awkward and how the MC was effected by it. It has it’s own little quirks. Can’t speak on updating stability. Overall, I felt that it was good. Do with that what you will.

I came here for the smut, but stayed for the plot. I've read up to chapter 27 and I can only say that this is my favorite version of Naruto I've ever read. I've seen plenty of fanfic from Naruto's pov or about him, but I've felt that many fanfics are more of an extension of OG naruto rather than trying to do something new with him as an individual. However this version feels like a breath of fresh air. He's crass, mature, bold, deadly, and intelligent. His experience in Anbu at a young age gave him the opportunity to be with people that care for him while also forcing him to become mature. It made me feel that he was more relatable because he felt like what an actual shinobi would be. Additionally, Naruto's interaction with others was really enjoyable, particularly the older generation. Hiruzen and Naruto's interactions are hilarious. Especially how they bond over sex and women, like how I imagen Jiraiya and Hiruzen. So far, I've really enjoyed reading this fanfic!