I will spend more time during my break to figure out a better story plan then, thanks for the suggestion, this is my first time writing a story after all!
With both ratings saying that, guess I gotta stop doing exposition about the hyper-religious world he lives in and that he will soon remove such beliefs soon to then focus solely on science, eh? As mythical creatures directly exist in that world, it would lead to increased mysticism or religious instigation. Sorry that this story wasn't for you.
And possibly implement such mysticism in society in junction with modernity. It would've been cool to make. I will add the fast-paced tag in my story to deter others who may not like my work.
Sorry that my story was too fast-paced for you, I will slow down the rest of the ageing process as I was simply creating a genetic streamline to then automate the rest of these governmental or technological processes in such a magical world. As some spiritual beings or supernatural phenomena exist in this world I was trying to apply this logic similar to a speed run.
checks, sorry for the cut-off. It was at the letter limit.
2 months and 24 days have passed, making Aluuin 4 months old from when he was born in July. At the beginning of November 1850, many interesting events occurred, it was the end of the American Sectional Crisis, where the separation of Slave and Free states was coming to an end. Through Aluuin's partial intervention, Georgia has become a Free state, with the recorded 382,000 Slaves throughout Georgia now becoming a great portion of regular society. However, it wasn't without its hurdles.
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This is a spoiler but: I was planning to add similar beings to Disney's Treasure Planet film, Star Trek films and shows, Astro Boy film (As the Blue Core reacts similarly to emotional responses like the Heart of Atlantis) and other franchises I shall not name for surprises. ;)
You'd be right, soon I will create a greater image for him in their minds that may involve unintrusive psychic influencing. Most Angelic Beings when in human form were described as such with them being uncanny - being almost too perfect. This power may work like Lucifer's "Perfection that fits Perspective." That makes him cute or handsome in any perspective, depending on the feedback he provides. Sorry for the late response, btw.
They set him down on a pillow of tallowed skin, more than likely elk for its rough yet durable texture. He views the room he is within; A bare, wooden structure with few furnishings, the bed his mother was laid upon had ivory sets underneath a leather sheet. It appeared sufficient, yet was unhygienic. 'It seems that hygiene is something that I must develop first.' David mused. He sits up, startling the people. They see him raise his right hand, in a gesture that appears simple, yet has holy connotations.
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You would be right compared to the Fanfic Wiki. I set it 10 years in the past to create further influence for the people as I felt that the Fanfic Wiki would put him at 15-years-old when he joined the army during 1875, that would be too extreme as the average was from 17 to 50-years-old. There are outliers that serve earlier for their country, but they are usually caught as by that point it was required for direct birth-certification checkups.
2 months and 24 days have passed, making Aluuin 4 months old from when he was born in July. At the beginning of November 1850, many interesting events occurred, it was the end of the American Sectional Crisis, where the separation of Slave and Free states was coming to an end. Through Aluuin's partial intervention, Georgia has become a Free state, with the recorded 382,000 Slaves throughout Georgia now becoming a great portion of regular society. However, it wasn't without its hurdles.
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Nobody has said yet whether his name should be kept as Lyle or not! Please, I wanted to do a poll.
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A man from 21st century London had died in his apartment, during a peaceful sleep. He felt unaccomplished with his previous life due to an uncaring government, dead-end job, no common social life or family to directly communicate with. He tried to reach out, he saw so much potential for the world he lived in, yet it was only provided to so few. So when he called to the void (That is Discord), his soul was caught by a being of unknown name. Which randomly selected a world and his 'features' to reincarnate into without listening to his ramblings. Now reborn in 1860 as Lyle Tyberius Rourke with a hyper-adaptive and 'self-acting body', he will learn that: - The greater the influence to the world he is in will lead to an increase of his strength, and the more he learns or already has understood topics. 'His body could do the necessary actions to complete it.' Sounding vague but promising, he is thrust into a world that he will do his best to alter for the better.11 Chs 165 お気に入り
If you can explain, what parts further make you feel like you want to slam your head? Is there too much over-explanation?
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