Yeah,I was't thinking of POV's at that time. But thank you for your opinion. I will try to improve in further chapters. Enjoy The Story
Thanks for the review, And yeah I was trying to experiment on different writing styles as I am still new, and this is what I felt comfortable with.
Not so sure, But will be not greater than 3 if it happens. Honestly,I still can't my mind around someone having more than 10 in some novels.So, no jade beauties.
HI I'am the author and my SHAMELESS 5 stars, Please see this note before reviewing it. - NOT A MTl,(Added this when some thought this was copied) I would have warned my readers if it was duh. You will find about it someday if it was,so there is no point in lying to all of you guys and waste your time. -So about story being familiar, Have you heard about a person dying for some reason and opening his eyes another world.-(Does it sound familiar?) - My point is the fanfic is a fiction of a ready made world we-authors use to make some thing out of it.You-readers may or may not like it. And it's fine because you have your own preferences and I respect.Even I have some preferences to read a story. -So don't go saying the story looks familiar in a FANFICTION SECTION.It's not even funny. -about my first two chapters, Honestly ,I wrote them after watching Fast and Furio*s movie series again.You may have noticed things like car modification and owning a garage and learning about how to modify them. -So,try to read the future chapters and comment on things like grammar,spellings and such things.It will be very helpful for me and the readers. -About the review,you can give me 1 STAR , I don;t really mind. There is an author who only accepts 1 STARS and delete the rest, even the 5 STARS.(You have my respect author) I wanted to do that too,But I will do that to my another novel I planned. That novel will be also slow paced if you are wondering. -I will delete the reviews, which are without a meaning.I am writing for the people to read, not accuse me.
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- NOT A MTl, I would have warned my readers if it was duh. You will find about it someday if it was,so there is no point in lying to all of you guys and waste your time. -So about story being familiar, Have you heard about a person dying for some reason and opening his eyes another world.-(Does it sound familiar?) - My point is the fanfic is a fiction of a ready made world we-authors use to make some thing out of it.You-readers may or may not like it. And it's fine because you have your own preferences and I respect.Even I have some preferences to read a story. -So don't go saying the story looks familiar in a FANFICTION SECTION.It's not even funny. -about my first two chapters, Honestly ,I wrote them after watching Fast and Furio*s movie series again.You may have noticed things like car modification and owning a garage and learning about how to modify them. -So,try to read the future chapters and comment on things like grammar,spellings and such things.It will be very helpful for me and the readers. -About the review,you can give me 1 STAR , I don;t really mind. There is an author who only accepts 1 STARS and delete the rest, even the 5 STARS.(You have my respect author) I wanted to do that too,But I will do that to my another novel I planned. That novel will be also slow paced if you are wondering. -I will delete the reviews which are without a meaning.I am writing for the people to read, not accuse me. =
Sorry to have made you hopes high, But its my own fanfic ,which I won't have to prove to you. And yeah,THANKS FOR GIVING THE FIRST RATING. Thanks buddy.
Thanks for the comment, If you have any ideas please comment them. I will try use them if feasible.
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original MARVEL: Let The End Begin
Hello,my name is Anthony and lets flip my life into the marvel where there are 'powers' that are present like there is some sales offer on them. Let's see the mad scientists who are everywhere with powers that can end the world casually. Where heroes are mainly saving people in their uncomfortable suits. Where you have to be atleast beautiful to even be a female super hero. Lets see the fights from the front row seat and feel the thrill. Even emotions are present if any of you forgot about them Lets start the story by flipping in the sky like a coin and very obviously falling in a world called MARVEL. One thing for SURE,it is going to be an rollercoaster of adventures. So 'LET THE END BEGIN!!!!' //// Hello GUYS, I'm the author and I'm ranting about some shit,please don't mind me and start reading the novel if you want to. So,this is my first novel and the much needed constructive criticism is required and please comment new ideas which I can take inspiration from . I am very open minded about new concepts and ideas.My grammar is also a little shaky as it is my first time to narrate a story .So,please bear with it for a while. Enjoy the story. Fun fact: THIS IS 'NOT' A 'MTL' //// PS:I don't own marvel and its characters. PS:The cover picture isn't mine,its credit belongs to its creator. please contact or comment me if you want to remove it.14 Chs 143 お気に入り
No,I will not use system in this fanfic.
MARVEL: Let The End Begin
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