ch 85 Chapter 85: Research & Preparation (Part 5)
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Skyrim
**Crime:** Theft of a sweet roll with malicious intent.
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Women
"If that asshole really cared, he could've at least come upstairs himself to talk to me. Whatever," she muttered before angrily making her way to the closet, which was made of light brown wood with mirrors on the front surface.
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No the round one
"Commissioner Bateman, Commissioner Bateman! A question, please!" one female reporter yelled out, but like the rest, she was ignored.
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Did our boy wrong
The more you talk the more you show your ignorance to everyone who comes across your comment. My book is a month old so I know I don’t have many readers. But…
The pier led to a large entrance way carved into the mountain on either sides as pillars hundred of feet high.
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Have you considered the fact that of out of all the readers who read this your’re the only one to notice this seemingly glaring issue? I don’t know if you’ve read fantastical fiction before but not everything will be explained to you in detail. The point is to use your imagination. Did I say how far the base is from the prison? No, so why assume it’s far? Did I say what type of helicopter it is and how fast it goes? No, so why asssume? The best example I can use is maybe is Harry Potter if you’ve read that. Despite being a great story, if we’re comparing your logic, why didn’t the author explain why the Hogwarts Express Train works in detail? Because stories require imagination in certain aspects or the information doesn’t matter enough to waste word count on. But maybe it’s me whose wrong so any readers who agree with him and want a detailed explanation on vehicles and distance next time, let me know.
The pier led to a large entrance way carved into the mountain on either sides as pillars hundred of feet high.
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It’s based off a real death. I’m really amazed how most people forget some of the outlandish ways people can die in our world .
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: An Unfair Death
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She’s special… you’ll understand soon enough
I'm a more than one hundred years old and still a virgin. If I go back to the Nether-realm like this, my enemies will laugh at me. So stick it out and let me have my meal." Trixie demanded before placing her hands on her waist as if to assert her seriousness.
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It’s a satire approach and even if it weren’t, crazier things have happened in reality because surprise, most humans are illogical when driven by emotion. Either way if this reasoning is all it takes for you to give up on the story then it’s indeed best you look elsewhere
'Dammit! Where the fuck is James!? He's the fucker they're looking for. It can't be coincidence that the fucker just left me here and with his clothes! Fuck!' The man inwardly vented, unable to fully express the unfairness he was feeling in that moment.
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Yea forgot that, I was drowning in info when doing these chaps.
Don, leaning forward in his chair, gave a nod of agreement to proceed with the enhancement plan. "What areas do you think I should focus on improving?" he asked, though already knowing he didn't want a bombardment of exhaustive details.
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Depends on how you look at it. Aren’t people just slaves just trying to get money? If he wants to grow stronger and protect what he has or gain more, he’s gonna need to work for it.
ch 85 Chapter 85: Research & Preparation (Part 5)
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Yep, no easy buckets
'There's even secret achievements?' Don questioned, surprised by what he saw. He couldn't help but feel a bit of relief knowing that he didn't risk his life for nothing.
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She's a mom, of course he looks good in everything
She immediately clapped her hands in delight. "You look so handsome, Donnie! That's definitely a keeper."
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Being called darling by a man hits the wrong kind of different
Don found the whole exchange both amusing and odd. Fabio seemed like a character straight out of a reality TV show, his flamboyant mannerisms and high-pitched voice making him stand out. 'He has to be obviously gay or doing that to get closer to women,' Don thought. 'But the latter doesn't seem likely; he seems too legit.'
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The things author writes for character development
His hands began to tremble slightly as the realization of what he had done slowly began to creep in. No matter what sort of world he had found himself in, Don had still come from a world of relative peace where taking a life was no small matter. Even if it was to some, he wasn't such a person. So to be made to do so, even by circumstance, came as a shock to his mind.
Supervillain Idol System: My Sidekick Is A Yandere
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