I find it better to talk with my readers. It helps me connect with them and encourage me to write. I guess...
I have been trying to make way for both this story and my entrance exams for universities, so comments will be appreciated because they motivate me to write.
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Thanks... But.. I have stopped looking now... I find technology and strangers better now... Like How I can talk to you without worrying that you will judge me irl. ~ a new chapter dropped, make sure to tell me how it is.
I also started talking to other girls, trying to make friends as I came back after 3 years and did not have any friends here. But it went horrible, like one girl who was a senior I met. I liked her, you know. Maybe I thought it could go towards something more, but she ghosted me after a few days, and when I was lifting myself, it affected me quite a lot. I started doubting that maybe I am just a fucking dork fat lesbian who is going to grow old and be alone with a cat who hates me. Another girl who I thought was going to be my friend and bff all that, straight up stopped talking with me and mocked me about my weight and dressing sense whenever she met me. Okay — I should stop now. I am pretty sure you did not want to hear all this. I just knew I would tell my mother all this If I did not say this to you — Strangers on the Internet, haha… I cannot talk to my mother or father about this; I don't want them to worry.
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And go pick up the suit and start wearing it... {Pic in the comments (3)}
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After seeing that her juicy ass was ready, I started preparing to put the anal beads inside her. {Pic in the comments. (1)}
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I'm glad you like it. I am currently swamped between my lectures and assignments. That's just an excuse I tell myself. If you've read the notes I leave for readers, you know I am a lazy person; I am working on myself. I did start working on myself, so I might upload a chapter soon.
I am sorry for the trouble it caused you, my dear reader. This issue has already been brought up by a few readers, and the problem was fixed in the later chapters. I did not change it in the previous chapters because I wanted to keep the comments that my fellow readers left there. Can you do one thing and change it from a one-star review or delete it and comment next time? I have two one-star reviews now, and they might draw away new readers. One last thing: Thanks for reading this novel. It is my first time. I hope all goes well.
Too chaotic writing style for us my good sir. A suggestion: write the lines of the MC or characters in cursive to distinguish which is inner thoughts and which is the dialogue.
Yeah, always. What are the suggestions?
I vote for Latex, Sex outdoors and food play.
Make sure to vote, otherwise I will just choose one.
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Hey Brynden. Thanks for the comment. It made me really happy. Well, at first, it made me angry, but then I thought I am not a damn good writer to even defend my writer ego and took a moment instead of replying instantly. Btw this happened when I was in the theatre about to watch a movie. So, I thought about your comment for about 3 hours before I came to the conclusion that you actually perfectly showed the emotion I wanted my readers to show. Anyway, I apologize for the short chapter, as I did not want to put Diana’s actual cause of distress in the same chapter as my POV. I don’t know why. However, partially, it might have been that it was 3 am when I finished writing, and I was dead tired. About the draft thing, I can’t read my chapters after I write them; I have low self-esteem and am a perfectionist. I have toned down the perfectionist side to only very important things. So, if I read my chapters after I write them, I am 95% sure I would delete them to write something new or perfect it. I do have a solution for this, which I have been thinking about. Maybe I put a Patreon or something where people who wish to provide insight on the drafts can do so. What do you think? Now, before you answer, I wish you to take a moment and look at the story like it is a real-life story. What is vital in a relationship? Communication. However, Diana should not communicate easily about her source of distress, even with her loved ones, as she is a princess. She is prideful and strong. Why would she break easily? I am adding personalities to characters and trying to leave some flaws for future character development. Now, I added myself because it is for the ending, which will come at the end. I do not wish for my story to feel stagnant, like: Movie I Am the King. What would happen— Alexia goes to a world? Takes the women she likes and technology. That’s it? That’s why I am leaving little eggs if you can notice them. That will make a good villain. It’s an experiment. What do you think?
The Multiverse Traveler ~ Alexia ~ TMT
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