(It doesn't even deserve that one star)
This is blatant plagiarism! You should be blind and dumb af to not see it!
the format of '<'system'> isn't really intriguing and eye catching.
Has potential, and is a _unique idea, and you seem dedicated and passionate about it, but I think some modifications are needed: 1. Add some relevant tags. Almost no one on this platform is gonna read something that doesn't have at least a few tags. besides the platform won't push and spread it out if you don't set it. 2. I can't differ which text is for the system and which text is the narrative; I mean put the system on a format like a common one is just putting the system commands or prompts or status between '[ 'system' ] or something like that. keep it up!
in a good way or bad...
Here's a mistake. the first pack is 'weapons'. right now both are 'accessories'
I mean 'makeshift weapons' buff.
[Effect: Strength, Endurance, and Defense increase by 20% when using an unconventional weapon.]
Global Awakening: Only I Can Respawn
Fantasy · AkshatArpit
I've never seen that before. Interesting. 👍
[Effect: Strength, Endurance, and Defense increase by 20% when using an unconventional weapon.]
Global Awakening: Only I Can Respawn
Fantasy · AkshatArpit
great start! let there be massacre!
-
original Reincarnated as a Fantasy Terrorist
In a world where nothing seemed to matter, Aisam once lived a dull life with no passion or dreams. But fate took a cruel turn when he perished in a tragic plane crash planned by terrorists. Suddenly reincarnated in a new world, he found himself in the body of a forgotten orphan from a long-forgotten novel he once read. Armed with a mysterious system, Aisam chooses to traverse the world pursuing the path he chose to accept... The Path of Terror. *** It's my first novel, and English isn't my first language so I kindly ask for your patience and support. Constructive criticism is greatly welcomed as I try to improve. That's why, the further chapters you go, the overall story may have improved.178 Chs 1.3k お気に入り
No. No one won't in this app if you ask around everywhere on comments.
Reincarnated As An Extra! Obtaining Tenfold Increments.
Fantasy · Riler3