バッジ 1
Moments 5
Daoist57X2fD
I like the story and the main character is interesting. He just seemed to give up so easy. Is he just a coward or does he believe in run to fight another day?
Daoist57X2fD
I still get surprised with female knights. The story seems to be moving along and is entertaining.
Daoist57X2fD
I really appreciate a good twist. I didn't see the berries or how the bell would be helpful. Good job.
Daoist57X2fD
Keep developing the MC, your doing great.
This is a great Anti-NTR story. I wish that it was continued but I'm patient. One of the things I enjoy about this story is how it ridicules the poor work put into NTR story lines. I understand NTR is a fetish niche but the characters are often so stupid. Come on, "I love Him, I love Him and I will always love Him, oh look a penis! I must fall on it and degrade myself to save the person I love! Oh, my brains have gone away and I've became addicted to this penis, I must do everything it tells me. look this penis wants to make me pregnant, wants me to use all of the One I loved friends penises and then all the of penises and I can ridicule Him! Oh and He has a small penis!" I think that's pretty much the universal NTR story line, with some variation. I know it's a Japanese thing but get a damn gun and shoot some of these people! He'll, poison all of the pompous assholes because everyone one of them treat the guy like he's either a total simp or stupid. Make some special cool aide and watch the life leave there eyes... I just don't like watching the little guy, get shit on and this author levels the playing field with his story.
Anti NTR-System
Fantasy · YandereLovers