i cant agree with you freind. mc was a martial artist in previous life. i have stated reason as how due to terrain the enemy king had low forces and how the most of the forces got diverted by explosion. heck even if he were nkthing esecial but with given history knowledge he could have find other way. since he knows martial art and had good knowledge of science so i arranged that plot. i agree u have ur opinion but i simply want to put my perspective which i believe i failed to put in my story as my bad. anyways thanks for the feedback.
updates will be on tuesday, thurday and saturday from nowadays.
cant be helped, first time bro.
thanks for the review. but i would like to clear some misunderstanding. first of all i am writing in modern english so obviously i am not going to use dialogues from medieval era, i intend to portray the feeling only so kept it simple. regarding disrespect u have zero knowledge my friend. –―the plots are historically based be it the placement of king at rear tent or shooting at eye or disregarding king's opinion as the real power lies in someone's hand. i can agree that the way i depicted might need more polishing but it has been considered in the realm of possibility. if the troops are diverted, kidnapping or killing is possible.. also there are any versions of indian history where royals were abducted or secretly assassinated from their main camp if u need then i can list out below as i chose my story from them mixing out.
well we learn from mistakes. some find it ok some find it hilarious but what i learn is to keep it as it is because life itself not perfect and we all have our own moments ..i believe my last scene might be off but in the realm of possibility , that's why i didnt made any amends.
it should work, u can dm me too. https://discord.gg/c5FbM4Vv
in battles of medieval era, the generals were considered the moral of the battle. their presence was manditory and people wouldn't recognise face but the ceremonial customs they use to wear. everything changed after the breech loading guns appeared and we know how trench warfare came up but before that ceremonial armors/uniforms were a necessity of that era.
Privately, Aditya relished the opportunity to don a shirt and pants after a prolonged period, finding comfort and familiarity in the attire. For the attire of generals, he opted for elegance, replacing the white straps with resplendent golden ones that resembled power and authority. To infuse a touch of tradition, he added a regal red cape, seamlessly blending modernity with the dress code used by current traditional generals.
Empire Ascension: The Rise of the Fated One
History · Jeet_1993
ah i see.
As Aditya slowly regained consciousness, he found out his right hand bandaged and little sprain in his ankle. His gaze fell upon Amira, tears streaming down her cheeks as she hovered over him with palpable concern. In that moment, a rush of memories flooded his mind, memories of another girl with tears in her eyes – Riya. The resemblance was uncanny, and Aditya couldn't help but find Amira's distress endearing.
Empire Ascension: The Rise of the Fated One
History · Jeet_1993
That's right. all my readers are not Indians. To not confuse them with mainstream European setting I had to do that "sugh" effort. let me know more precise in para if u find anything odd. thx.
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original Empire Ascension: The Rise of the Fated One
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This is the story of a modern man who transmigrates to 16th-century India in a parallel world after dying to save his first crush on a date. He regresses as a lowly-ranked soldier in the camp of Hemu, the last northern Hindu king, who is fated to lose and die at the hands of the Mughals. With his modern knowledge and past experiences, the protagonist alters the course of history, forcing the Mughals to surrender and retreat beyond the Ravi River, which is in modern-day Pakistan. As a reward, he is granted trading rights and becomes the emperor’s personal attendant. Using this opportunity, he sets out to reshape the empire. By promoting private enterprise, establishing trading company, and creating opportunities for the lower communities, he begins to shift India’s economy away from the feudal system toward modern capitalism. And all this began with the advent of his mercenary army, which excelled in firearms far ahead of its time. His journey is filled with trials, including internal turmoil, political strife, and the looming threat of invasion from the Mughals in the west, Tibet from the north and the Dutch and Portuguese in the south. As the emperor’s trusted aide, the protagonist not only rescues the crumbling empire but also forges his own path, eventually claiming the title of emperor himself. Join him on this incredible journey of empire's ascension, as he explores how India could have been in the 16th century if history had taken a different course. With just one battle's result, the fate of the entire world is transformed. Discord : https://discord.com/invite/pSeBQUVRrf Discord id: jeet_author_1993 (for direct contact) Notes: Don't forget to check sample work and maps in aux as glimpse of this novel Disclaimer: This is a fictional story based on history in alternate universe. It doesn't claims to be always historically correct. Reader's discretion is advised. All images used are AI based. Feel free to contact me in case you have any dispute.248 Chs 3.9k お気に入り
it will take time, for now i can only release on tuesday, thursday and saturday. unable to give time since I am getting married this month. hope u understand.
Empire Ascension: The Rise of the Fated One
History · Jeet_1993