Mu_Shin

I see, ty! :)

The plot thickens! Is roulette a short term or long term future sight? e.g. 1s to 1day, or like 5 years?

Ty for the chapter despite the difficulties, it was a joy to read. :D Hope you can fix your PC problems!

TLDR: rly good chap, but very long= more mistakes, shorter chap= less mistakes + more uploads, but the choice is up to you. Wow. That was insanely long. Despite having rly liked this chapter, I feel like I should point out a few things. Firstly, I think it's a good idea to not have many more chapters this long, especially if you don't enjoy it. I say this because it felt like the quality dropped, typos, missing words, misgendering, etc. A few mistakes I never saw in your previous chapters recurred numerous times. Of course, it's rly annoying to review smthn this long, so errors are natural, but still... Additionally, depending on your update schedule, and the joy writing gives you, shorter chapters can be better(*cough* daily uploads *cough*). What I mean by the joy you feel when writing, I mean the satisfaction you get after creating a masterpiece, not whilst writing. Was that confusing? Even I'm knda confused ;; Anyways, thx for the huge chap, despite my criticism, it was still rly good. Also, write however you want to write, that's the most important thing.

As someone with no knowledge of Worm, I must thank you for explaining the powers every time. Simple and short 😘👌.

Nah, you don't just ghost people for a few weeks, come back, drop an absolutely savage cliffhanger, and just get to leave. Tbh tho, glad to have you back :)

Just to tell you that some people still enjoy this story, so if you ever feel the desire to continue, please do (no pressure). :D

Ty, I hope you get out of this negative trench. I'm sry if I pressured you in anyway, life should always come first.

I see, thank you :)

When did he get that? I thought he got the walk walk fruit?