Fixed.
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Fantasy · MistrHe
Chapter got published with all the new info.
I know the chapters are repetitive, but I wanted the MC to reach the new lobby. I've been limited with things for the MC to do inisde of the old lobby, which is why I made him clear floors so fast. All the idea I have planned for the new lobby won't disappoint. Adding more than 10 new things to do inside of the new lobby. Including things to do with creating groups, manufacturing, trade, the group tower, etc. All servers from Earth will be combined into this new 20th Floor when you reach it. Thus, everything that's about to be added will change the tower when more people reach the 20th Floor.
Shameless author here, Please note that this book is my first work. Thus, must edit suggestions you make in the first few chapters may have already been fixed. However, don't be afraid to make suggestions and edits, they will always be read. As I have improved as an writer I've noticed mistakes in my writing. So as a result, a rewrite for the first few chapters is coming soon. Chapters get released everyday. If I'm not able to write chapters for a period of time I will make an announcement. During the weekends I try to post more than 1 chapter. However, no promises can be made. I am planning to make another book soon in the future. I am still deciding how to release chapters for both books, so please let me know. If you have an suggestions about a book you want to read, I will be happy to hear about it!
After reading a bit more of this novel, I've realized I made a mistake in my previous review. The protagonist of this story is the System in the beginning. 7/8s of each chapter is just the system talking. If you like to read game logs, this is for you. Looking farther into the story the author realized how bad of a job he did in the first chapters. I recommend that you rewrite the first 10 chapters if you still hope to attract new readers.
There needs to be a period before 'Can'.
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Fantasy · Cosmictear
Always appreciated.
How you want the thinking to be?
Yeah just fixed it.
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Fantasy · MistrHe
I was on break for school and went somewhere I couldn't write. So I decided put the series on a break. However, when I came back from break, I had zero motivation to write. Eventually I just forgot about the series until recently and I decided to start writing again.
Max Level Necromancer
Fantasy · MistrHe