MistrHe

MistrHe

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2023-11-26 入りました United States
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MistrHe
MistrHe
7 months ago
Replied to Robert_Wolgast

I was on break for school and went somewhere I couldn't write. So I decided put the series on a break. However, when I came back from break, I had zero motivation to write. Eventually I just forgot about the series until recently and I decided to start writing again.

MistrHe
MistrHe
11 months ago
Replied to BlankCultivator

Fixed.

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Max Level Necromancer

Max Level Necromancer

Fantasy · MistrHe

MistrHe
MistrHe
11 months ago
Replied to BlankCultivator

Chapter got published with all the new info.

MistrHe
MistrHe
11 months ago
Replied to BlankCultivator

I know the chapters are repetitive, but I wanted the MC to reach the new lobby. I've been limited with things for the MC to do inisde of the old lobby, which is why I made him clear floors so fast. All the idea I have planned for the new lobby won't disappoint. Adding more than 10 new things to do inside of the new lobby. Including things to do with creating groups, manufacturing, trade, the group tower, etc. All servers from Earth will be combined into this new 20th Floor when you reach it. Thus, everything that's about to be added will change the tower when more people reach the 20th Floor.

MistrHe
MistrHe
11 months ago
Posted

Shameless author here, Please note that this book is my first work. Thus, must edit suggestions you make in the first few chapters may have already been fixed. However, don't be afraid to make suggestions and edits, they will always be read. As I have improved as an writer I've noticed mistakes in my writing. So as a result, a rewrite for the first few chapters is coming soon. Chapters get released everyday. If I'm not able to write chapters for a period of time I will make an announcement. During the weekends I try to post more than 1 chapter. However, no promises can be made. I am planning to make another book soon in the future. I am still deciding how to release chapters for both books, so please let me know. If you have an suggestions about a book you want to read, I will be happy to hear about it!

MistrHe
MistrHe
11 months ago
Posted

After reading a bit more of this novel, I've realized I made a mistake in my previous review. The protagonist of this story is the System in the beginning. 7/8s of each chapter is just the system talking. If you like to read game logs, this is for you. Looking farther into the story the author realized how bad of a job he did in the first chapters. I recommend that you rewrite the first 10 chapters if you still hope to attract new readers.

MistrHe
MistrHe
11 months ago
Commented

There needs to be a period before 'Can'.

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From Earth to a Hellish World

From Earth to a Hellish World

Fantasy · Cosmictear

MistrHe
MistrHe
11 months ago
Replied to Goodorbad

Always appreciated.

MistrHe
MistrHe
11 months ago
Replied to Goodorbad

How you want the thinking to be?

MistrHe
MistrHe
11 months ago
Replied to BlankCultivator

Yeah just fixed it.

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Max Level Necromancer

Max Level Necromancer

Fantasy · MistrHe

  • Max Level Necromancer original

    Max Level Necromancer

    Fantasy SYSTEM MAGIC SUPERPOWERS VIDEOGAME INTERSTELLAR SUMMONS

    In the year 2023, a mysterious global event shatters the world's normalcy, targeting individuals aged 16 to 30. One ordinary individual, leading an unremarkable life without human connections or excitement, experiences an extraordinary transformation on New Year's Day. Amidst the numbing routine of his mundane existence, this individual retreats to his lonely room, seeking help from alcohol. Confidence diminished and disheartened, he stumbles upon an unforeseen hope—a blue window that prompts him to select a difficulty level: Easy, Normal, or Hard. Drunk and unaware, he mistakenly clicks the most challenging level: 'Hard.' Suddenly transported into a boring, empty white room, devoid of any conventional elements, he encounters a 'godly' figure—a former 'Game' participant turned administrator. This mysterious being explains the rules and nature of the game, revealing a team-based structure across all difficulty levels. Teleported into a room gleaming with an overwhelming choice of weapons, lacking conventional gaming stats, the protagonist is drawn to a particular weapon—the scythe, the weapon of a powerful game class, the necromancer. Transported back to the white room, a door appears, signifying the start of the tutorial phase consisting of five floors. The completion of these floors promises an upgrade to the protagonist's bleak living conditions. Venturing through the door to the first floor, the protagonist encounters a small, enigmatic creature—an unexpected obstacle. Overcoming initial fear, a newfound skill, 'Composure,' bestows the ability to maintain calmness when in danger. With the acquired skill raising his confidence, the protagonist confronts the creature again, wielding the scythe with determination. This time, the encounter ends in victory, marking the protagonist's success in clearing the first floor. Celebrating the triumph, a new screen materializes, rewarding him with experience points, level advancement, gold, and a newfound stat window, propelling him into an unexpected and thrilling journey within this mysterious game-like reality.

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