i believe it's good idea, but the execution is important.
i was expecting this to be a chapter [img=faceslap]
Thanks for the chapter! i like the concept, and i feel you writing getting better, keep up the good work.
thanks for the chapter! very good fanfiction.
thanks for the chapter!
You should focus on the empire first, and see if Arthur is able to take such long absences and is he politically powerful enough to make the best of it along with the princess.
I think it would be good for Arthur to meet with the dwarves first and acquire runic weapons and have a sort of trade relationship with them before going to kill the frost dragon lord at their request, this will also have Arthur be officially recognized as a powerful figure by all the nations. (Well you can forget about this last sentence)
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it's good chapter[img=recommend] ,get some sleep and take care of your self .
A/N: This feels like a useless chapter to be honest, it was supposed to be reactions from the nobles after the ascension ceremony, but I felt like I needed to first showcase why Renner marrying Arthur was a problem for them so I changed. It also doesn't help that I haven't slept in 36 hours.
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good chapter.
Thoughts on the chapter? Anything out of place or anything that seemed rushed? Please comment and tell me.
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Love this fan fic and the fan service is appreciated but not like this, i don't believe she could have fooled him with drugs.
Nice chapter, i liked seeing edstorm and they are in line with her character and event that happened, good work.
Princess and her knight(Overlord AU)
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