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I’m too busy with school and work so when I have a lot of free time, I’ll probably come back.
この本は削除されました。
You’ll understand later.
この本は削除されました。
This is my first novel, even I wasn’t expecting it to be perfect when starting out.
I am down to negotiate. Just tell me what part of the chapter you were unsatisfied with.
I added that in there just to make drama.
bro read a little further, I explained why. And if you think about the reasoning does make a little sense.
Lol
<Hey! Get away from me! getaway now! Aughhh!> The screams of the announcer echoed in everyone's head, no longer making them hesitate.
Rise Of The Primordial Devourer
Fantasy · Primordial_Devour
Don’t worry, the concept would be the same but I will try to improve on the grammar.
Guys, I know there are several mistakes that I made during my time as a new author. So, I plan on recreating this novel because any change I make, might or might not affect the story but don't worry I plan to do so when I finish the first volume.
Rise Of The Primordial Devourer
Fantasy · Primordial_Devour
bro, it wasn't even that good. That was my first novel, and I consider it trash. this was an embarrassment to my current self. If you want to continue reading it, I'll put it back.
Rise Of The Primordial Devourer
Fantasy · Primordial_Devour