Leon_Alquino

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Leon_Alquino
Leon_Alquino
1 years ago
Commented

Look ... Taking a LITTLE inspiration from AlienWarlord's I'm Spider-Man (MCU) is acceptable , BUT, this is almost direct plagiarism ! Not only the story but also the pace, personality , lines and decisions of the MC are clearly being copied from that story !

"Oooh, you nerd…this is COOOL!" Richard ran into the box, "IT'S BIGGER ON THE INSIDE!"

Spiderman Ultimate Peter Parker

Spiderman Ultimate Peter Parker

Anime & Comics · Daoist_Over_God

Leon_Alquino
Leon_Alquino
1 years ago
Commented

What exactly is the value of Units/Credits in the Marvel universe was never really explained but rather left to the imagination of the Reader/Viewer based on the reaction of all the characters to the mentioned amount . Shouldn't the Collector have much more than what was shown ? Sometimes even intergalactic empires act as if a few million units are all they have! Will this be addressed in the future ?

"Sounds good to me…wait, billions? He had a bounty with billions? Split five ways, that's 160 a piece!" Quills eyes sparkled.

Spiderman Ultimate Peter Parker

Spiderman Ultimate Peter Parker

Anime & Comics · Daoist_Over_God

Leon_Alquino
Leon_Alquino
1 years ago
Posted

AT LAST! I miss this story so much ! I don't know if it was a pseudopremonition or a coincidence ( probably a coincidence , sometimes I kept remembering this story ) but today . kept thinking about it shortly after waking up . Author , a few years ago you said you were going to come back and when you didn't , I was upset , as were many others , but I'm glad you're back ! Question : Did you just come back to finish the story or are you going to continue with it for a while longer? And will you also update/continue your other stories ?

Leon_Alquino
Leon_Alquino
1 years ago
Posted

I really liked the rhythm, the powers, the MC's personality, the canonical characters' personalities, everything . But what I really loved was the way the main character reacts to the canonical characters! In almost all the fanfics I've read about DC ( And Marvel ) , the characters are shown abusing the protagonist and he, just because he followed their stories, ACCEPT this abuse with immense happiness ! ????? Ridiculous ! Even worse : When they DON'T take this abuse, they are instantly labeled as a potential supervillain and are imprisoned 'indefinitely' until they prove that the Justice League can trust them . I don't know what's worse : this happening in fanfictions , which claim to want to show a certain "realism" in these stories or the fact that these things are actually canonical in comics , cartoons , TV series and films .

Leon_Alquino
Leon_Alquino
1 years ago
Commented

There are a few ways : 1 - Get Plot Armor . 2 - Hit the Genetic Lottery . 3 - Become an Isekai Cheater Protagonist . 4 - Born with a ridiculously exaggerated amount of "Natural Talent" . Unfortunately it seems that all of these seem to depend entirely on chance ! 5 - You can try to convince the Author to make you strong and skilled without any justification because... Let's be honest... That's all you need to be powerful in fiction !

"Sigh, what a drag. Isn't there an easier method?" grumbled Shikamaru.

Naruto: Blind Hyuga

Naruto: Blind Hyuga

Anime & Comics · Hkj

Leon_Alquino
Leon_Alquino
1 years ago
Commented

Are you kidding ? It looks great ! Mainly from the older PJ . You just need to give House more prominence . Despite being simple , it is better than many popular fanfics , as it shows the spirit of your story ! Just a suggestion : Change the image of the Older PJ to the Younger PJ and , as the story continues , make him age on the cover , along with everyone behind him .

Leon_Alquino
Leon_Alquino
1 years ago
Replied to NotRob

Klaus "found peace" ( as with almost all the other Villain Protagonists ) , Rebekah formed a family with Marcel , Alaric faced no repercussions and built a school of supernatural beings and everyone else who survived until the end of the series continued living their lives quietly . And these were just the ones I had the patience to follow . There were many others !

'You know something is strange…Katherine might have been one of my favorite characters and I did kinda have a crush on her but…I definitely wouldn't have cared if something happened to her since she totally deserved what she got in the end.' I thought to myself as I started to wonder if there was some sort of powerful spell at work that made me so…so wanting her wanting to help her to fuck her, it just wasn't me.

As Kai Parker in TVD (SI)

As Kai Parker in TVD (SI)

TV · Shane_Town

Leon_Alquino
Leon_Alquino
1 years ago
Commented

This paragraph summarized the entire Naruto World !

"…." It seemed like Akiko took some damage from that. But it was true. Akiko is good as fighting, killing, using force, but not at other things like espionage, spying and disguise. She has always been so strong that she has never needed those.

HP: The Arcane Thief

HP: The Arcane Thief

Book&Literature · Snollygoster

Leon_Alquino
Leon_Alquino
1 years ago
Replied to Shane_Town

That's why I say she deserved it! What bothers me about these shows is that people much more horrible than her ( that is , ALL the main characters ) got happy endings simply because they were the protagonists or because the protagonists liked them .

'You know something is strange…Katherine might have been one of my favorite characters and I did kinda have a crush on her but…I definitely wouldn't have cared if something happened to her since she totally deserved what she got in the end.' I thought to myself as I started to wonder if there was some sort of powerful spell at work that made me so…so wanting her wanting to help her to fuck her, it just wasn't me.

As Kai Parker in TVD (SI)

As Kai Parker in TVD (SI)

TV · Shane_Town

Leon_Alquino
Leon_Alquino
1 years ago
Replied to Imma_Instigate

This ridiculous inconsistency also made me hate DC and Marvel comics ! Now I just watch movies and read fanfictions .

On one side, you have those that would follow after Batman's example. People like Flash, Green Lantern, and Aquaman, who believe that killing, in any form is an inexcusable and evil act.

I'm Spider-Man (MCU)

I'm Spider-Man (MCU)

Movies · AlienWarlord