4Leafy

Love for the good grammar. Read the mtl for this novel it was”understandable”.

Yeah, A lot.

This will be my last comment until you get 50 chapter cuz I want you to cook. Here are my thoughts/review on chapter 10: The introduction of the dimension rift function in Chapter 10 raises some apprehensions for me as a reader. While the concept itself is intriguing, I worry that it might lead the novel down the path of becoming a world-hopping story. As an avid reader, I believe that strong character development and immersive world-building are essential elements of a compelling narrative. However, in world-hopping novels, the constant shift to new settings can sometimes detract from these aspects. Instead of delving deeper into the existing characters and their world, the focus often shifts to introducing new environments and characters with each jump. This approach can be detrimental as it may prevent readers from fully connecting with the story and investing in the characters' journeys. Additionally, it places a heavy burden on the author to continuously create new and engaging settings and characters to maintain the reader's interest. While the introduction of the dimension rift function presents exciting possibilities, I hope that the author will balance its usage effectively to ensure that the core elements of the story, such as character development and world-building, remain central. By doing so, the novel can maintain its appeal and keep readers engaged in the protagonist's journey without sacrificing depth and continuity. Lastly Question on the system, is it one of these system when the host die the system die/destroy or it is one of these system when the host die the system can just find another host? Just wanna know what type of system it is?!