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Rotten_CucumberY

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Give me Contract Now!

2023-08-18 入りました Global

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Moments 131

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Why do I feel like the Duke know Leonor?

She was met with an emerald green eye and most of his face was covered in bandages. Surprisingly, his chin was uncovered and unscathed, but because of how his bandages hung from the upper half of his face, she couldn't see his mouth. 

My Disfigured Duke Husband Helps Me Plot My Revenge

My Disfigured Duke Husband Helps Me Plot My Revenge

Fantasy · QueenFrieza

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the bedroom in my mind.

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The young mage finally made it to her bedroom. It was the only place she had solace in the entire manor. While it wasn't the most extravagant room, it had shelves full of books she loved and a comfortable bed.

My Disfigured Duke Husband Helps Me Plot My Revenge

My Disfigured Duke Husband Helps Me Plot My Revenge

Fantasy · QueenFrieza

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this scum father, can we slap him or something.

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"Get out of my sight!" he shouted, causing his light brown hair to fall into his face, but he deftly swiped it back. "Send the messenger back inside." 

My Disfigured Duke Husband Helps Me Plot My Revenge

My Disfigured Duke Husband Helps Me Plot My Revenge

Fantasy · QueenFrieza

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I have feeling that this Anna is white lotus type girl.

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"I promised to do whatever I saw fit," he spat. "Anna is far too fragile to be married if that's what you're implying." 

My Disfigured Duke Husband Helps Me Plot My Revenge

My Disfigured Duke Husband Helps Me Plot My Revenge

Fantasy · QueenFrieza

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Keep it up author and try to learn how to write a good writing style. I'll add it to my library first

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the story have some potential, but I'm sorry author i dont like your writing style. it's not that it was bad but the words that you used it's really feels awkward and strange for me, it's feel like it was written by AI. But i hope the author could still improve himself and try to see what kind of writing style that people like from other novel. good luck author <3

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