バッジ 2
Moments 4
maria_bobby
I like the dialogue of the goddess. Very epic and grand—good writing!
"Retribution is relentless, and revenge is long-lasting. How can I let you off the hook so easily?" she hissed. "Death doesn't exist in my realm; torture does."
A Hate Reader gets Transmigrated to Another World
Fantasy · TheHatedAuthor
maria_bobby
Think you need to add something in here about him sliding off her breasts and onto the ground (otherwise it sounds like he’s literally proposing on her boob), which would be funny too cuz you could make it sound funny
Before the woman even had a chance to respond, the black-haired teenager bowed his head low and got on one knee.
A Hate Reader gets Transmigrated to Another World
Fantasy · TheHatedAuthor
maria_bobby
Jason seems like a very funny/interesting character. Excited to read more….
Feel the same way—was laughing all throughout chapter 10
A Hate Reader gets Transmigrated to Another World
Fantasy · TheHatedAuthor