impossible. that doesn't happen.
A loud crash rang out, it was the sound of Zombie's teeth biting into his dagger. Faced with the Zombie's somewhat superior physical strength, he glanced at the arrow above its head and made a bold decision.
My Level Zero System
Fantasy · Forever_Flame
some of the most obnoxiously over-the-top prose I have ever seen
He glanced down at his hands, now steady despite the turmoil within. His golden eyes, a legacy of his lineage, glimmered with renewed determination. His black hair, once neatly kept, now hung in wild disarray, a testament to the trials he had endured.
The Omnipotent System
Fantasy · Adams2004
the japanese are disgusting perverts and unrepentant war criminals who did things that made the nazis themselves recoil in horror. their country is a patriarchal shithole pretending to be a nice clean utopia.
"Azure Dragon Clan?" Atlas echoed in surprise.
Tower of Heaven
Fantasy · Crocs_is_Dead
that is also bullshit. ice and water are not different things. ice is just frozen water, water with less energy.
Affinity: Fire (100%), Water (100%), Earth (100%), Wind (100%), Light (100%), Darkness (100%), Lightning (100%), Life (100%), Death (100%), Time (100%), Space (100%), Gravity (100%), Poison (100%).
Novel's Extra: I Awakened The Strongest Physique From The Start
Fantasy · Anonymus_Nighter
the title does not end with "stealing ideas from solo leveling."
[Ding! You have gained the hidden class: Shadow Monarch (SSS).]
Online Game: Starting With SSS-Ranked Summons
Games · Risaliyah
who did you hurt, that you are offended by someone calling out blatant sexist objectification?
A young female voice rang out through the hallway in exasperation as a beautiful girl with large breasts and wide round hips rounded the corner of the hallway. She had blond hair tied in a ponytail and sharp black eyes! There was a small scar on her left cheek that ran all the way down to her neck, but that scar took nothing away from her beauty. In fact, it only added to the beauty, making her look more dangerous and exotic! She was wearing the uniform of Nature Academy, a black skirt and shirt that hugged her body tightly and made her assets stand out modestly, along with a black jacket with the school logo on it.
Strongest Superhuman System
Fantasy · Legioneer_1000
"tradition" doesn't make it any less nonsensical. that he took an annoying nonsense trope and blindly copied it without even thinking about whether it makes sense is even more a condemnation of his incompetence.
"Attributes, are straightforward and don't need explaining except for intelligence. Intelligence is the metric for mana and magic. It's very important for every class in this world."
Online Game: Starting With SSS-Ranked Summons
Games · Risaliyah
Here're your mistakes: Leon not raping Roselia doesn't make him a good man, it's the absolute bare minimum to be a decent person. You take the absolute bare minimum of basic human decency towards women and treat it like it's some transcendent kindness. leaving that aside, it's narratively an awful decision to have them have sex before you've even tried to develop a proper romance with chemistry and tension. Here's a tip: the best and most compelling romances I've seen and read are structured such that both characters have some emotional need that the other satisfies. Thus, it makes emotional and logical sense for them to be attracted to each other and they fit together. LocalScriptMan on youtube has a video on relationships that explains it well. You aren't able to do this because your protagonist is a shallow plank of wood with almost no characterisation, goals or motivations. Another tip is that if you have to state that your character loves another, they don't love them. you should be able to get across the attraction and create the chemistry through clever writing.
No? that's not what cthulhu does. Cthulhu's main "power" is a sort of subconscious telepathic communication through dreams. If you read the Call of Cthulhu you would see that. His slight stirring led to horrifying esoteric nightmares, visions, mania, suicides among the psychically sensitive. He doesn't actively cause the insanity, people just break from being exposed to even a fragment of him. He represents the unknown and insurmountable. A "lesser cthulhu" would be one of his star-spawn. the spawn have a lesser version of his dream-inducing effect and are also able to regenerate and transform, as they are functionally immortal and are made of matter that doesn't exist on earth. A lesser cthulhu would be better called something like a "Spawn of R'lyeh", "Spawn of the Great Dreamer" or "Spawn of the Slumbering One" or something like that. if you were going to try and quantify a star-spawn's abilities into skills, off the top of my head I'd recommend framing his nightmare causing abilities as a curse spell. He can use it to mark a person with a curse that would make them susceptible to Cthulhu's nightmarish influence, which would have the effect of gradually driving them mad.
Mind Shatter: Temporarily disables an enemy by distorting their perception of reality, causing confusion and mental fatigue.
My Charity System made me too OP
Fantasy · FantasyLi
Agility probably means something like reactions and coordination.
[Speed: 25]
My Living Shadow System Devours To Make Me Stronger
Fantasy · renegadex