ManisGupta

ManisGupta

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Chill, Gaming, Youtube Shorts, Nerd,

2023-06-17 入りました Global
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ManisGupta
ManisGupta
1 months ago
Posted

Writing: Readable, enjoyable but nothing more. (3/5 ) Story Development: smut story nothing profound here. But antagonist could have been written better... A cold, cunning ruthless, master of demonic art is introduced but the next chapters his mother wants to sleep with Mc. Feels like failed comedy. Plus, everyone in sect is cuck-fetish who loves to see their wives with Mc. Character design: Chinese cultivation novel, big dual mountains, wide hip, long legs, jade skin free from all impurities, lotus feet, moon like eyebrows, ocean like eyes, cherry lips, and same. Update stability: 5/5 ( best ) World Background: 3/5 ( for a smut, this book has good world background that is comparable to highly great novels but has some issues because it's more Smut focused rather than world building. Overall: 3/5

ManisGupta
ManisGupta
1 months ago
Posted

Good read but not a great fan of Dark Fantasy that has child sacrifice. Writing Quality: Fairly readable. Story development: not to be judgemental but good development yet I am not the fan of such dark fantasy and cold, calculating Mc that doesn't even show his love to his women. Character design; Fairly good with lots of progression is side characters and heroines too which is very rare on villain novels. Later on the antagonists are real deal because multiple system and modern people. The battle of calculation is good but that's it's downside because it's slow pace. Update stability: 5/5... Best update stability🔥 World Background: 3/5... Not much known about world aside from necessary things, perhaps the world building will be starting soon, the novel is slow pace... Very slow pace. Overall: 3/5 This is a great potential story, with a reasonable and logical Mc which also becomes a down side for this novel. Slow Pace, Less action, less bed actions, more calculation, strong words are holding this boil down. If Mc showed more love to his women, more bed action and better world progression then you might have gotten more readers. The story is good for dark fantasy lover where Mc doesn't even hesitate to kill child then it's for you.

ManisGupta
ManisGupta
6 months ago
Posted

Good story! Gave exactly what it promised. [img=update]

ManisGupta
ManisGupta
9 months ago
Posted

Absolutely fire🔥🔥🔥, read the previous version, sad Webnovel removed it 🥺🥺, overall, the story goes in a smooth flow with good character introduction and proper development, especially Mc, who keep gaining strength rapidly and also Good Se-ggs...

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ManisGupta
ManisGupta
10 months ago
Replied to Miso_Hen

U mean Ne tori, or NTR for Zhang Wei? If I remember, Zhang Wei's purchased slav or Li Mei is a Supporting character and 400 coin package.

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ManisGupta
ManisGupta
11 months ago
Commented

Generating

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ManisGupta
ManisGupta
11 months ago
Replied to Primordial_Truth

Nice pics man☺️☺️ you said you will release a comic chap right or eggs😍

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ManisGupta
ManisGupta
11 months ago
Replied to A_Dragon_Fantasy

Leave him, he is a kid Look at his profile 😂

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ManisGupta
ManisGupta
11 months ago
Replied to Ethernal7

How much of a shame you are 😅 man...

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ManisGupta
ManisGupta
11 months ago
Posted

Who let the dog out [img=proud][img=proud][img=proud]

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