Finger_of_Shiva

Finger_of_Shiva

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Finger_of_Shiva
1 years ago
Replied to Diooooooooo

I am glad!Yes, from a perspective as a reader, I understand your feelings haha.But I can say, according to current schemes, the protagonist-centered chapters outnumber the opposing ones by a wide margin.

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Finger_of_Shiva
1 years ago
Replied to Diooooooooo

Hello!Yes, the proportion of perspectives between the secondary characters and the protagonist is similar. Although the protagonist maintains a significant difference.During this period, especially, it was so to change the focus of the chapters and structure future events.But I appreciate your sincere and kind review. I hope you didn't dislike my story too much.

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Finger_of_Shiva
1 years ago
Replied to Cdn_Memu

Answering your question, yes, he is evil. His moral is black.To remove any fog of confusion: The play maintains both labels, because Federick, yes, can be categorized as a villain, but at select moments. He is not a crude character who regards life as pasture, he doesn't ignore the consequences of his actions; rather, he moves at his convenience. Therefore, his attitude most of the time will not be reflected as a villainous characterization, but based on selfishness and self-interest... Antihero?

Finger_of_Shiva
Finger_of_Shiva
1 years ago
Replied to Homelander69

Hello!It is a conventional transmigration of the xianxia genre. It will have similar elements to the "Villain of Destiny" novels, but the difference would lie in its Modus operandi: Relying more on his wit and not a surname. (His targets will not be the "children of destiny").The novel is currently at an early stage, where the events unfold in an introductory role; therefore, it may give the image you mention.By the same token, the personality does not shine as promised. Its current morality is conventional because it will be structured based on the development of the protagonist's personality and identity in future chapters.

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Finger_of_Shiva
1 years ago
Replied to Homelander69

Thank you very much for the correction, my friend! I have been editing. Sorry for the quality

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Finger_of_Shiva
1 years ago
Replied to Homelander69

It wasn't a usual day for me

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Fantasy · Finger_of_Shiva

Finger_of_Shiva
Finger_of_Shiva
1 years ago
Commented

I can be my own fan lol

Finger_of_Shiva
Finger_of_Shiva
1 years ago
Commented

I did not like the interaction in this chapter. He gave her high-quality designs, which even surprised the old veteran lady; therefore, he should not feel ashamed to ask for "money". A serious lack in the personality of the protagonist, with no common sense in value. Please, author, keep these points in mind when writing. Thanks, I like the novel very much at the moment.

Finger_of_Shiva
Finger_of_Shiva
1 years ago
Posted

Well, here is the writer supporting his content (I have good self-esteem). As a note: All the content is great, it's just that, honestly, the translation leaves something to be desired. Thanks

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    Fantasy

    Sobre lo alto del cosmos... No cuelga nada. ¿Cómo lo sabes? No soy todopoderoso, pero tengo sentido común, ¿sabes? Es como si propusieras la vida después de la muerte, una banalidad para el desesperanzado; pero existe la reencarnación... ¿Qué? Confuso, sin sentido y carente de lógica... ¿Sobre lo alto del cosmos? ¿Acaso puede haber otra joya más brillante que adorne la corona? No tiene sentido, así como el renacimiento... ¿Quién quisiera recordar recuerdos pasados? Traumas, apegos, seres; a menos que seas un esclavo. ¿Pero quién no es esclavo? No hay excepciones... ¿Será que sobre lo alto del cosmos encontraré respuesta? Hijo de puta, es el mejor marco de promoción abstracta que he visto...

    78 Chs 17 お気に入り

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    Goaizu

    Fantasy ACTION REINCARNATION SYSTEM COMEDY MAGIC CULTIVATION TRANSMIGRATION VILLAIN ANTIHERO XIANXIA

    Above the cosmos... Nothing hangs. How do you know? I'm not all-powerful, but I have common sense, you know? It is as if you were proposing life after death, a banality for the hopeless; but there is reincarnation... What? Confusing, meaningless and lacking logic... Above the cosmos? Could there be another more brilliant jewel that adorns the crown? It makes no sense, just like rebirth... Who would like to remember past memories? Traumas, attachments, beings; unless you are a slave. But who is not a slave? There are no exceptions... Could it be that above the cosmos I will find an answer? 'Son of a bitch', that's the best abstract promotion framework I've ever seen...

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