HAhahaha Karl reminds me of a typical fool in life
Ever the master bullshitter, Karl continued to describe the events that transpired while she was asleep, shaking his arms and dancing wildly for emphasis.
Fantasy · TheHatedAuthor
Amazing to see how much Jason has grown already
"It's okay, Eve. You're not alone," he said consolingly.
Fantasy · TheHatedAuthor
love how vivid the writing is
As he tilted his head upwards, the black-haired teenager suddenly caught a glimpse of a familiar creature, and his eyes refocused on the moving blur of black stripes. Karl swung through the trees as if it were second nature and landed nimbly in front of the hate reader with a smug smile.
Fantasy · TheHatedAuthor
Fully agree.
Not a bot, just a guy who likes good stories. But nice try.
glad to see Jason's maturing
'Shit, how deep are we?' the hate reader pondered to himself. 'No. Shut up, Jason. It doesn't matter. We need to survive. Eve, Karl, and I."
Fantasy · TheHatedAuthor
panting, is a weird way to start this off
I like how you throw us right into the action—it's very engaging and makes me want to read more
Love the writing. So vivid and descriptive.
HAHAHHA eventually he'd be able to resist the poison! I knew it :D!
Only…this time was different. For the first time in his life, Jason ate the mushroom, and only silence filled the air.
A Hate Reader gets Transmigrated to Another World
Fantasy · TheHatedAuthor