Thanks for reading
Elias sighed, fumbling for his keys as he reached his apartment door. "It means I couldn't keep up," he said, his tone bitter. He paused, letting the key hover over the lock. "Anytime I thought I was making progress, I'd hit a wall. They pushed us hard—physically, mentally—and every time I thought I could handle it, something would happen. I'd collapse during a run, or I'd miss a target by an embarrassing margin. I…" He trailed off, his voice growing quieter. "I guess I just wasn't cut out for it."
My Shard Bearer System - Elias's Legacy
Sci-fi · HambinoRanx
All very true things that happen Though not all things that happen will follow the cliche formulas. The MC is also flawed and with issues. Things he addresses as time goes on and things escalate Reality is often everyone is corrupt to a degree
Geras leaned forward, his voice firm but understanding. "You do have a choice, Elias. But consider this—without this program, without control, fear could take over. If this effort fails, there's every chance they'll decide to eliminate shard-bearers altogether. With this program, there's hope—not just for defense, but for the people who've been chosen."
My Shard Bearer System - Elias's Legacy
Sci-fi · HambinoRanx
If you could do me a favor, what chapter did you notice first had these issues?
Thank you; that’s one reason I paused writing so I can go back and get everything fixed
I got the dialogue tags mixed up. I’ll get this fixed as well. Much apologies.
Thanks for catching this, I have them on auto upload and it looks like it duplicated; il get this fixed when I get home
System Upgrade
My Shard Bearer System - Elias's Legacy
Sci-fi · HambinoRanx
The story is on break while I take a break and work on more stories, I will come back to this one day though, no idea when
That’s fair; then I just did a poor job writing it correctly 2 years ago lol
"I thought I killed you, young lady," he sneered. "I don't know who might have sent you, but you should know that this is way out of your league. I'm only assigned to collect the souls of humans tonight so you should leave before you might get yourself killed in the crosshair."
From Human to Skeleton: Revived with Infinite System Crystals
Eastern · HambinoRanx
Hunting*
"I thought I killed you, young lady," he sneered. "I don't know who might have sent you, but you should know that this is way out of your league. I'm only assigned to collect the souls of humans tonight so you should leave before you might get yourself killed in the crosshair."
From Human to Skeleton: Revived with Infinite System Crystals
Eastern · HambinoRanx
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original My Shard Bearer System - Elias's Legacy
4.97 最新リリース
Elias Kael thought his life as a chef would be simple—until the day he bonded with a mysterious shard and awakened the power of the Sharder System. Now, with an eccentric companion named Dot, Elias is thrust into a world where Shard Bearers are hunted, their powers coveted by hidden factions. With his forgotten past resurfacing and deadly enemies closing in, Elias must unlock his true potential, master his growing abilities, and uncover the secret behind the shards before it’s too late. But the deeper he digs, the more he realizes—he isn’t just another Sharder. He might be the key to everything.100 Chs 1.2k お気に入り
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From Human to Skeleton: Revived with Infinite System Crystals
4.91
Imagine being murdered on your way home to your girlfriend, only to have your soul stolen and handed over to the Demon King as an offering for goods. Could it get any worse? This is the story of a man cursed with a skeleton body, now working alongside the Demon King to unravel the mystery of his new existence. As he navigates this dark new world, he discovers the twelve universes that govern humanity, encountering both allies and enemies along the way. Struggling to regain his humanity, he must master his newfound powers and survive the dangerous politics of the 12 universes. Can he uncover the truth behind his transformation and reclaim his soul, or will he fall to the darkness threatening to consume him? - (1) Castle = custom character that will be blended into the story, art work will be created (5 custom characters so far) (150) PowerStones weekly = Bonus Chapter Golden Tickets = You get to create the power of a world Live discussions on my Discord server: https://discord.gg/nfl/715 Chs 10.4k お気に入り
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Transformed into a Penguin, and now I have unlocked a system
“I’m… just trying to get home,” Jiang stammered, his voice feeling weak, the words foreign on his tongue. Her lips curved into a smile—one that sent both heat and cold coursing through him. She stepped forward, her heels clicking softly on the pavement. “Home? What if I told you that home is not where you think it is? That you’re destined for more than this?” Her hand reached out, cold fingers brushing his cheek, sending a shock through his body. Before he could pull away, his vision blurred, and the world around him began to spin. His heart pounded in his chest, his limbs felt heavy, and something unnatural gripped him from within. The city lights, the woman, the very air around him twisted and bent until everything went black.51 Chs 75 お気に入り
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Arc Of Time: Pillars Of Light
4.85 完了
Sean and Arthur, skilled operatives leading a dedicated team, embark on a mission to apprehend a notorious drug lord. However, when their operation takes an unexpected turn, their lives are tragically cut short. Miraculously, they awaken in a vibrant new world brimming with magic and Spirit energy, reborn as Toki and Articius. Retaining their memories from their previous lives, the duo sets off on an extraordinary journey to uncover the mysteries surrounding their past and the events that led to their demise. Immersed in a realm of awe-inspiring wonder, Toki and Articius They encounter mythical creatures, encounter ancient prophecies, and discover the vast potential of Spirit energy. As they traverse this captivating world, they forge deep connections with allies who aid them in their quest for answers. With each step they take, Toki and Articius They push the boundaries of their newfound abilities, delving deeper into the enigmatic nature of Spirit energy. Along their transformative journey, they confront malevolent forces, unravel the secrets of their past, and ultimately seek to understand the truth behind the events that shattered their previous lives.202 Chs 2.5k お気に入り
Arc Of Time: Pillars Of Light
ターゲットPower Ranking Weekly #1
時間Aug 14, 2024 - May 14, 18:00
報酬Mass release 50 chapters
This was my first attempt at ever writing; so Im glad you enjoyed the story
Arc Of Time: Pillars Of Light
Fantasy · HambinoRanx