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Is this novel same as it forces MC to always complete system quest with penalty? It's like MC is puppet.
Mtw?
Last 4 chaps were only focused on what will happen and what will he do. It broke the reading pace. It would have been better if it was shown and given specific chaps rather than telling everything.
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finally someone I can agree with..... too much info dump on unnecessary things and no real info about important things.... and worst author flares up when critique is made.
who said I was hiding behind a different account? i was reading through this account so I posted a review through this one.... as simple as that... my review is very generic as in chap around 180 all I am reading is like news report.... nothing vindictive as i said story is good but well it's making me stop to continue it.... so i said up the game....hmmm I didn't leave a review earlier bcoz I was telling you directly.... as for why I left it now? well I left discord server bcoz your mind didn't want to accept any remarks.... you were taking your personal problem out on others for no reason......so yeah you were wrong there...
too much telling is going on and not showing in writing skills. like i am reading some news..... author better up his game otherwise it will go downhill... it's a good story but not so well in the writing department.
If I have to say what I liked about the story then it will be how Lucifer tamed Shawn's mother and girlfriend at the same time. Haha... It was damn good.
Lustful Paradise
Urban · Evil_Beast