A nice story with a slow build up that's enough to hook people into continuing to read it, I like the development of some characters, and have expectations of others to be the same.For now, 10/10.
Good beginning, a bit slow. Interesting characters and the author seems to leave a lot for interpretation, thing that I found funny and that hooks me in.
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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
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I think i wanted to say "It was such a pleasure for her" - not pleasurable... My autocorrect is on, and sometimes because I don't see wrong letters or something I just brush past it and consider it *right*.
"Ahh! N-no! Victoria, you..." Yena was assaulted by pleasure from both sides. She could feel Victoria suckig her milk away. It was such pleasurable for her. In only a few seconds, it seemed that her nightgown got wet.
Fantasy · Qijumelzikon
Thanks for those, it really helps
Heating this, baby Rune cried even harder.
Fantasy · Qijumelzikon
You're not, hehe
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Fantasy · Qijumelzikon
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
Quite an interesting story with a lot of stuff going on. In my opinion the characters are quite lively and fun to read. Their background is a thing that makes me want to squish their cheeks and step in between them to fix some things, but that only makes it more entertaining
The First Princess of Averlyon
Fantasy · Aphrodiitewritess