All is cleaned now, all the old material is taken out so it is good to read now.
volume one is just chapter 1-40 rest is old material that i am working on, i am removing it as I go along every volume is 40 chapters .
I am rewriting my book. one volume is 40 chapters, and there is old material left, I am working on it, removing the old material to be worked on. after chapter 40, go to volume 2 straight on.
Thank you so much for your review. I am rewriting this story from the start. The plot stays pretty much the same, but I am expanding, explaining, and adding stuff up, so I am taking all of this very carefully and trying to improve my story and get there some more depth and put those Damon´s in good use when I sometimes get there, but I am just starting my rewriting, and this will take time, but this was soo good to get real honest feedback. THANK YOU!!![img=recommend]
She is a woman, Mimi is a woman. Thank you for review.
there is because this is story about pack but that isn't main part of a story. there is all sorts of stuff in my story so every warning will apply. This is for adults and for strong ones because polygamy isn't the roughest theme in my story. Krista. the author :)
A nice story. Very believable characters and I look forward to the new songs. Smooth good rhythm in storytelling and believable dialogue.Excellent world building and character development.- The story has a lot of potential. Will definitely be in my library and I enjoyed this story very much.
-
original The Salvatore Saga, Part Four: My new Life
最新リリース
My life took yet another turn when my mind was broken into dust. I was mended by a veritable miracle that granted my Damon to get back. Number four was now the whole new version of him. Our life, as perfect as it seems, showed me cruelty when three of my cubs died. Pack had lost something. Destiny took us apart only to get together in the new way of life.260 Chs 88 お気に入り
- original
The Salvatore Saga, How to heal a world? (Book 2 of The New world.)
最新リリース
It has been 800 years since my mind exploded. As I get myself back together, I and Wulfe need to help the world to heal. My firstborn son, Derek, the World healer will accompany us in our endeavor to heal the world, to make the earth livable for humans, and to help them come back from underground. But then it is time for Wulfe to go the heaven, his time has come. The world is healed, humans are above ground and I have lost everything. I let my feline nature take over and become feral, mere jaguar with no feelings.3 Chs 1 お気に入り
- original
The Salvatore Saga, Part three: Seven years pain and life after that.
I gave Damon my everything, I let him feel me, the whole me and it was too much. He divorced me, and they all left me. Pack did not want anymore. despair and pity started to feel less as my friends, old and new ones, started to take care of me. It was time for to me reborn, once again, to be a leader, to be a doctor. Be the best supernatural shifter specialized doctor. I had to keep busy, and not think what I had lost. My life was not easy, seven years that changed everything, and then Damon wanted me back. I had changed, he had changed. It was time to live in the pack but everything was new and then again, nothing had changed, not at once.134 Chs 39 お気に入り
- original
The Salvatore Saga, Part Two: My life in Salvatore Pack.
This is my life after a big revelation. Damon got another, Mariella and he loves her. I have Adam and Charles and we are now multiples. multi-shape shifters, no more just werewolves but we are now feline shifters with multiple forms and vampires too. Damon chose me to be his alpha female, even Mariella is the one he wants. So my life is not easy. It is the balance of learning to live in a pack run by Damon. learn to watch him loving someone else. Learn to share Ada, and Charles too. and Learn to be chaos, energy exploiter, the one who does not belong as I am not magical like the rest of the pack are now witches and wizards. I am chaos, they are energy manipulators. I am only an energy exploiter. Damon still hangs in me. trying to connect. but I have moved on, I try to let him be with Mariella and I am happy with Adam and Charles. Complications in my life bring now Damien who has his own body and he is cruel, kidnaps several times. But I will get through everything. I am immortal, unkillable and there is nothing that can kill me for good.177 Chs 40 お気に入り
- original
The Salvatore Saga, Greatest force In The World.(Book 3 The New World)
Damon salvatore, previously known as number 4 life has been filled with duty and care after Mariela and number one went to do their duty to create life. For him, there is no one in the World until he finds a wounded female shifter. What he does not know is that this is Mimi, his one and only, gone feral because of the loss of Wulfe and others. Damon starts to heal her and himself as well. He is determined that their epic love, fated love will grant a happy ending for them. He must first tame Mimi, and teach her to love again.3 Chs 1 お気に入り
- original
The Salvatore Saga, World without Humanity.( Book 1 of The New World.)
Future of Salvatore Pack after Techmages brought the end of the world. Mimi is lost as her mind explodes with all of those feelings that she sucked. Because of her being also a loader, those feelings are now in the world. All over and in various objects. it is up to the Salvatore Pack to start to travel the world, to find those feelings and get humanity back on track. New friendships are formed as they witness what life is like in human cities underground so they must help humanity. Whatever it takes.1 Chs 2 お気に入り
- original
Salvatore Saga, Part One:My life with Damon.
完了
I was once human, I got kidnapped because I had genes that one crazy scientist was looking for, and his experiment turned me into a supernatural, first lab-made super werewolf. I escaped before they got to do their experiment finish and I found my pack, run by Adam Hauptman. I had someone to protect me. Then my life came Damon Salvatore, he became my everything, my husband, my doctor, my biological half even. But he was not perfect. Inside he had an evil twin called Damien and that one wanted to torture me. he wanted to rip our love apart, to drive us apart. I grew as a woman, I became a leader of my organization, wife, and almost hero, but where I saved so many, I also lost so man. This is my story, life with Damon, our lovestory.561 Chs 449 お気に入り
- original
The Darkest Hour.
完了
After Elena's Death, Damon is not human anymore, but he lives in the darkest hour as a bloodthirsty killer.1 Chs 2 お気に入り
- original
Dear Diary, Today I am Letting Damon Go
完了
Four years ago ,she lost love of her life, But now it is time to move on, learn to love, let go of the past.1 Chs 0 お気に入り
- original
How to kill my friends?
完了
Mimi´s experience being imprisoned by the medical institute, she tells her story for Damon number four. This is part my universe in my fanfic1 Chs 4 お気に入り
- original
Dear diary, Today I Lost Damon...
完了
When life is perfect for Elena Salvatore and Damon, something suddenly tears their life apart.1 Chs 2 お気に入り
- original
The Perfect Life.
完了
This is one afternoon of Damon´s life, his musings. Just a short moment of happiness.1 Chs 4 お気に入り
- original
The Violet Witch
Jessie was normal girl who was going to see the world when mystery man came and saved her from two vampires. jessie learned that she is not a human,but a witch and powerful and rare. A Violet witch . She went to live in pack of werewoves, who will protect her, as she discovers her powers and abilities.4 Chs 1 お気に入り
This is fanfic, not meant to be any kind of big hit. I am in no need of any kind of promotion or help with my book. Please, no selling of any kind of services.
The Salvatore Saga, Part Two: My life in Salvatore Pack.
TV · ippu81