I can understand your frustration bro, but why did you gave 3 and 1/2 stars, its'snot even worth half star.
Bro i tell you what, i don't like when fan-fic creator abuse Xiao Yan. But later, i realised that he was a complete psycho and he should be treated even worse then this . And about this fan-fic, its's a pure waste. A pure Xiao Yan's ass licker. I hardly think that he was even the Mc. This is one of the worst fan-fic I ever came across. I have read it till the point, when he had become a half-saint and you know what, it's a pure trash.
Sahi hai tab, likhte raho, padhte raho. kuch mahina me, apne aap theek ho jayega. Bas likha band mat karna.
Sorry, Gupta JI
That fool up ahead is correct, your grammar is horrible, no coma, no full stop, no bracts while using system notification, how will you differentiate between, who is speaking what. You need time, may be few more moths, but write, with the flow of time, you will overcome this mistake. I hope you a good luck, Sharma Ji I am Indian too, and if you think, i am giving unnecessary advice then don't take it.
Without reading, I will give this. If there was a option of 0 star, I would have gladly given that. But it feels like you are lucky today. cant't you find any better idea . You all author are really hilarious.
Bro i think what , you are sick .
この本は削除されました。
Hey bro , please raw link . bro give it .
Brother please give the raw link bro . That's , the link from where you translated it . the Chinese name , please give it .
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original BTTH A NEW START
4.75
When Xiao Yan was fighting against ' Eight winged black serpent ' in rescue mission of Qing Lin, he created the ' Angry Buddha Lotus flame '....... The explosion was sensed by a member of hall of soul who was around the area , after the explosion , he went into deep come and during the explosion when Yao Lao was saving him , the member of the hall of soul appeared and with his sneak attack captured Yao Lao without any resistance , since Yao Lao was too weak at that time . After explosion , Xiao Yan's soul was badly damaged and later he died without the protection of Yao Lao . But that was not the end as a soul from earth takes over it and soon his journey starts from there.... A new story and a new legend.... plot changed from there.... according to the new guest of the world .... This is my fan-fic . Of course the original BTTH is not mine . And I am writing this for self satisfaction . Author - Lord Dhruva .27 Chs 277 お気に入り
- original
Solo Cultivation.
In this poignant tale, Yama Raheja, a gifted cultivator, faces the trials of life after his mother's tragic demise. Born into a conflicted lineage, his father expelled from the prestigious Raheja clan, Yama inherits a legacy of struggle. His exceptional cultivation abilities draw admiration but also hostility. Tragedy strikes as a black ring bestowed upon him hampers his progress, leading to a decline from prodigy to perceived failure. Yama's journey is one of resilience, revenge, and redemption as he navigates a world where familial discord, societal expectations, and supernatural forces shape his destiny. Will he fulfill his promise to his departed mother and become the strongest? Note:- This is my original story . And I own this story . The story will take pace after 20 to 30 episodes . Till that time , stay tune to this story. Our protagonist won't be savage and badass from start but he will become stronger by hardwork and efforts , ofcourse he will have something unique as well but that would be pointless without hardwork . I hope , you will enjoy this story .0 Chs 5 お気に入り
Bro, you posting it again , well then.....give us the name of the translation, atleast.....
btth the goddess system
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