DaoistVkK20U

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2023-04-20 入りました Denmark
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DaoistVkK20U
6 days ago
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This story is great. Favorite at the moment, just wish it would update faster.😫 But I hope we soon get a hint to what his bloodline? Kekaigenkai? Is? The mc gotta have his power up some time.😉

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DaoistVkK20U
12 days ago
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I have read this story a couple of times. And would be very happy if it got picked up once again. It still has potential to be more interesting and has a lot of substance what has yet to be seen. Miss it.🥰😫

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DaoistVkK20U
13 days ago
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Im so looking forward to Takuma becoming an ANBU, it’s going to be lit.

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DaoistVkK20U
15 days ago
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I really enjoy this story, its chill and feel really kingdom building ish, but with a cool twist, im very interested in the progression. Keep it up.

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DaoistVkK20U
15 days ago
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I’m very intrigued, a lot better than I hoped for. Lets see where this goes.

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DaoistVkK20U
16 days ago
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Bro their* it’s always wrong

It was not often that thier lord gave them important missions like this so the two demons, Susamaru and Yahaba, ran on top of the building to look for thier prey.

Demon Slayer : The Silent Journey

Demon Slayer : The Silent Journey

Anime & Comics · Emmanuel_Capricorn

DaoistVkK20U
DaoistVkK20U
16 days ago
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Nobody says pretty tricks. It should be petty or something else, mostly insulting.

"You got some pretty tricks up your sleave, and you look young." his eyes turned into slits, like the eyes of a playful cat.

Demon Slayer : The Silent Journey

Demon Slayer : The Silent Journey

Anime & Comics · Emmanuel_Capricorn

DaoistVkK20U
DaoistVkK20U
16 days ago
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Wouldn’t a decent demon with a sneak attack be able to kill him with no trouble? If he doesn’t even notice people talking to him wouldn’t any seam on be able to come up from behind and just stab him to death? How is the mc op in any way? Its more like he’s average with an op power and a glaring weakness anybody who knows he is deaf could take advantage off.

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DaoistVkK20U
16 days ago
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What? How? Can he feel people sneaking up on him with over sensitive skin? This is so bad. There is a lot of ways to compensate for blindness in fiction but not deafness. He will never be able to understand a group discussion, he will allways have to look at them when they are talking. Reading lips also doesn’t work in reality, I will give it a pass as its fiction, but I still think it’s shitting on story immersion. Better sight isn’t compensation for deafness. Either give him his hearing back or read up on how deafness is portrayed in fiction and in real life. Its debilitating and without an actual crouch to compensate, the character will only progress on plot armor and that will get old really fast. Maybe I’m wrong and the story will tackle the issue very well in the coming chapters. But I don’t really thinks so, this feels like it was written by an edgy kid so I don’t have any hopes, what ever. I may read more, I may not, the story has a lot of grammar mistakes aswell and is missing important details, and a lack of understanding of how money and the world functioned in the start 1900. It just feels like a bad attempt at something unique and attention grabbing.

So when I was the age of 13, I spent most of my time studying while also training my senses. I was deaf and that meant I relied heavily on my eyes and I had blind spots. So in order to make up for that, I had to sharpen my instincts and other senses to an extremely high degree.

Demon Slayer : The Silent Journey

Demon Slayer : The Silent Journey

Anime & Comics · Emmanuel_Capricorn