It's a good what-if story, why was it removed earlier? Will you upload it in full? The last time I read it I stayed when they invade Italy, what chapter is it?. Google translator.
It's obvious that they haven't seen Naruto, and even in the fic they take the time to explain that Orochimaru used very low quality bodies to revive Gensou and the Kages, which is why he can't use his full power.
The truth is that I like this story and I think it could use a revision, to improve its quality in terms of narrative and writing, improving its experience for more demanding readers, although personally I think that only a few things need to be improved and that The plot It's good.
The chapter is good, the premise is interesting, I want more of this, I hope it doesn't fall, because I really feel like this has potential. I've read several novels but this is one of the most promising I've seen, it just needs to keep updating and show brilliance.
Take your time, it's better than canceling.
It's always good to take a break, it helps both mentally and physically, to rest and relax, to beat up the trolls.
この本は削除されました。
Thanks for chapter
2. The name is inconsequential, what matters is the nickname that his teammates and antagonists give the MC in the future.
There is also the fact that by silencing Maxi an inconsistency would be generated, because in a certain part of the story the protagonist shows that the objective is for Maxi to realize that he is really good and does not really seek to be a supervillain, rather some kind of antihero.
It is literally the best HxH fic I have ever read and it would be a shame if you left it here, I really hope it continues because the story is getting very interesting.
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