お前はもう死んでいる
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its a trope
"Just call it The Protagonist Sect"
Eastern · MrKonic
Very nice concept. The story is slow and without any info dumps, but not too slow to become boring. But I don't really like the story all that much although its a nice one, what i do like more is the writing style, very immersive and takes step by step. I've only read the first chapter and I might edit this later
Hi, it's been about a month since I started writing this book. You can reply to this comment any questions you have and I'll answer them. First lemme talk about the story itself: The story is about a boy named Ellion who's a slave. He met a powerful being who gave him the Invincible Damage System where he gets stronger by taking damage. The story mainly focusses on the journey of Ellion to become stronger and revive his dead siblings. Of course there's more to it than that but that's just the gist of it. This and many of my future novels will be part of a collection called "Civilization 0" with the first and main book being "Civilization 0" (its out but I've paused it and might edit it later on so its not worth reading for now) This book and others of the same collection take place in the future of Civilization 0 in the "new world" created by Alex and Sophie
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The + in ranks can mean added stats (you have more than the basic needed stats but not enough to reach the next level). For example, 100mana makes one an E rank mage and 150 mana makes one a D rank mage, this way, anything in between 100-150 is E+
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well, maybe because future Rasiel isn't an ability anymore if yk what i mean
"If that's the case, then that means that we still failed even after restarting"
Eastern · MrKonic
nice start, information is given quickly at the start and also feels natural so there's no info dumps, at least not at the moment. writing is good and no grammatical mistakes . the update quality is okay for now
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probably existence value but i might abandon that idea
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Who gets the reference?
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I'll give all 5 stars so you don't think I'm trying to be mean but, I've gone through your page after coming across it coincidentally but I've noticed some weird thing. Maybe it's just me but some of the your works are similar to Adui's(author of infinite mana and my idle gaming system) works, or at least the tittles are since I have read your works
Infinite Energy System Made Me Too OP!
Fantasy · Astral_Pandemonium