I appreciate the honesty, I wanted to keep my current story, but I accepted the fact that I wouldn’t be able to write at my best if things stayed the same. I’m new to writing and I’ll admit I messed up. I want this new version to be a greater story.
You’re right, he has no need to dodge. But this is just a habit of the MC. People naturally want to avoid getting hit. Also I think it just makes for an better fight scene, rather than if he were to never dodge. If this is such a problem, I am willing to make changes in future chapters.
As her attacks intensifies, her attacks become more frenzied. She aims for my head in a desperate move. Swiftly, I bow my upper body 90 degrees, leaving her vulnerable.
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They can’t, but he wanted to keep his grip on Mosquito Girl. Flames have some effect on light as Sabo’s flames were able to repel Kizaru’s light attacks.
Choosing to confront the flames directly, I coated my entire body with armament haki, maintaining a firm grip on Mosquito Girl as she looked on in horror at the oncoming flames.
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No, it’s not heavy, MC just wanted to flex his muscles. Although I probably could have worded it better.
The instructor regained his composure, jotting down notes as he steadied himself. "Proceed to the weightlifting," he directed, gesturing towards a series of bars, each varying in weight. Positioned before the largest bar, I assessed its weight estimating it to be around 10 tons based on its sheer size. With a determined grunt, I hoisted the weight above my head, the effort apparent in the visible flex of my muscles.
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This is an AU Kizaru
"Shut Up" With an determined expression, I unleash the full might of my Conqueror's haki. The power surged forward like a tidal wave. The air crackled with with visible energy and the ground formed cracks under the immense pressure. The force momentarily halting Vaccine Man.
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This is just an AU interpretation of Vaccine Man. He is classed as Dragon level. Remember dragon level includes monsters like Golden Sperm, Elder centipede, Orochi, and homeless Emperor. Even Yonkos will have some difficulty fighting them.
"Where the hell is the backup?" I mutter in frustration, feeling the weight of the escalating battle. "This fight is starting to piss me off," I grumble to myself, my patience waning. "I'll have to hold him off until reinforcements arrive,"
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Asahi’s talent is the same as Kizaru’s if not a little greater.
Filled with determination, I solemnly vowed, "Asahi, you may not have desired this life, but I pledge to honor your name." Rising from the bed in the unfamiliar hotel room, A glance in the bathroom mirror offered the first glimpse of Asahi's body. He bore average features, brown eyes, and spiky black hair, standing at a height of 5 feet 9 inches.
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This is just my interpretation of Vaccine Man since we do don’t the extent of his strength. But he is dragon level, and dragon level monsters are said to be capable of wiping out multiple cities.
First fight chapter in the books. I hope that gives perspective on Asahi's current strength.
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No, but it’s a possibility in the future.
Standing on the roof of the hotel. Z city surely is one hell of a sight. To actually see this place with my own eyes makes all the difference.'Finding Saitama shouldn't be difficult, I just need to scope the area with my observation haki until I sense his strength.'
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original One Punch Man: Light Human
A man is sent into the One Punch Man universe. Fortunately, he gets some powers to help him on his journey of becoming a hero. Semi-OP protagonist Slight AU elements (I noticed that there was a disturbing lack of One Punch fan-fics. So I created my own. First time writing, so any feedback is welcome)10 Chs 458 お気に入り
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