yeah so he is weak
Due to fate, I was chosen as the incarnate and successor to the Dark Angel, once one of the most powerful beings in this world. The Dark Angel was killed by the Angels of Eden in a battle, called Armageddon.
Fantasy · Joyon
just the world? weak
Due to fate, I was chosen as the incarnate and successor to the Dark Angel, once one of the most powerful beings in this world. The Dark Angel was killed by the Angels of Eden in a battle, called Armageddon.
Fantasy · Joyon
you do not fix mistakes ..
dude you have said it in the comments ..how about you write this?.in the novel y'k? like write how he feels, how he may think he is being manipulated? about his determination to revive his mother at any cost? you have really given up on writing and expressing his thoughts
so he can't even voice his thoughts ? what kind of genius is he?he doesn't have basic logic
this child knows he can resurrect people?
no emotion in this sentence , you really feel nothing ..have you ever heard about punctuation ?
what cheap quality
"Aiden quickly comes to mommy," Alice yelled, thinking about the plane tears that threatened to fall any moment from her beautiful black eyes, but she held herself back.
Fantasy · DesEnd
why this sudden change in perspective ? it feels cheap this way, just pick one and go with it, this is insulting
"Ah, still handsome as ever." Ignoring my own narcissistic comment, I walked toward the bathtub for the bath.
Fantasy · DesEnd
*preserve
"Why can't strength be the ability to protect, to preserve life, instead of destroying it?"
Rebirth of the Eternal Sage
Eastern · WanderingShadow1