a good chapter indeed
The writing is really following a symmetrical good flow.So far it's very good
it's such a beautiful yet interesting novel .The first chapter is so engaging
The story starts with an amazing introduction of the past and the rest flow is pretty good and not so dramatic yet the emotions are right,The protagonist is not weak and not super strong even after having some supernatural elements, it's not illogical,just the chapters are a bit short otherwise it's a definite read story
Hmm, the cheif seems to be a good human being and the princess is just stubborn but not bad
it's definitely a good start not hanging the readers to find out about the history but gives them a main plot
sure it will be a story regarding power but with some twists
good response ffro mc
irene appeared finally .I am getting A vibe that she I'd very straightforward
So, the book is very engaging and the plot flows pretty smoothly without much drama and also not too precise but rather setting the mood for further interactions and further curiosity for the readers.The mashup of fantasy and reality is great.
Stardust serenade:Love Across The Cosmos
Fantasy · Hiddensoul_7