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verytired
verytired
1 months ago
Commented

To come to his defense here, the dude is like 13. Most people aren't exactly level headed at that age, especially with what he's been through.

Cassian's face twisted with anger. "Foot Massage Mastery? What the hell? How is that supposed to help me? I'm not looking to become a masseur! I want to be a swordsman—a fucking swordsman, not a foot massager!"

Warrior Training System

Warrior Training System

Action · J_a_zzy

verytired
verytired
5 months ago
Replied to unseenpickle

Isn't this clan considered reprehensible even in this world? Besides he's just a normal guy, it's not easy to get rid of morals that are deeply rooted in you.

verytired
verytired
6 months ago
Replied to IsekaidFred

it's more like beginning after the end no? It's stated previously that the TV is made using like magical enginnering or artifacts or whatever. Like modern technology is replaced by artifacts.

"Yeah, I know, I'm always watching your matches on the TV and you're always so cool when you win! How are you always doing that?"

Flashy Adventurer System : Show Off to Get Stronger!

Flashy Adventurer System : Show Off to Get Stronger!

Fantasy · Meowder

verytired
verytired
verytired
6 months ago
Replied to Dimension_King

Lightning magic? Although I'm pretty sure you'd just fry the damn laptop if you didn't know what you were doing.

verytired
verytired
6 months ago
Replied to Haze_

I don't know about hero complex cause saving a kid he saw as family is pretty natural. Definitely anger issues though.

Holding the face that hurt a bit, something seemed to have made him forget all his reasons as his body trembled out of anger before he started dashing forward beating that guy without stopping, even going as far as pushing him down and raining punches on the kid's face.

Skill Creation in the Fantasy World

Skill Creation in the Fantasy World

Fantasy · Seraphinn_

verytired
verytired
6 months ago
Commented

It is nice how the stances are described. It's hard to write characters who use ranged weapons in an interesting manner so it's cool to see it done well.

verytired
verytired
8 months ago
Replied to Yuishiro_Haru

it's just a single wing to the left. I wanted to explain it better, but I knew I couldn't write much the days following and wanted to get the chapters out. Sorry for making it a bit messy, I'll try to clear it up in the following chapters and thank you for showing interest in the novel.

verytired
verytired
9 months ago
Posted

Shameless author review thing? I've gotten to enough chapters where I felt like I could do this so yeah. Please try out the novel and let me know what you think. I would really appreciate the comments

verytired
verytired
9 months ago
Commented

not great imagery but basically like jin mori from god of high school

My arms still restrained, I brought both my legs crashing down at the face of the monster holding my head in place, folding my body in half. 

Reborn as a Vessel

Reborn as a Vessel

Fantasy · verytired

  • Reborn as a Vessel original

    Reborn as a Vessel

    Fantasy ACTION ADVENTURE SYSTEM MAGIC WEAKTOSTRONG TRANSMIGRATION NONHUMAN EVOLUTION ORDINARY WIZARDS

    All that Ajax has known for as long as he can remember is struggle. A struggle to feed and clothe himself. A struggle against a man supposed to be his protector. And a struggle against the financial responsibilities of life. Seeking reprieve he would spend what little free time he had indulging in the worlds of fiction and fantasy like many. However, just when there seemed to be an end to this struggle in sight, he met a cruel fate at the hands of a desperate coworker. Waking up in a familiar yet dangerous world as an unknown species will his history of struggles carry on with him to his next life? ***************************************** Hey, so a brief look into my account history will let you know this is a rewrite of a story I dropped just a few months ago which might be confusing to a lot of people as it would be better to just write a new story. However, when I tried to get back at writing the idea of this novel kept eating at me, so please forgive me, any who may have read my first attempt.

    167 Chs 64 お気に入り

  • Incomplete Vessel (Dropped) original

    Incomplete Vessel (Dropped)

    Fantasy ACTION ADVENTURE SYSTEM MAGIC WEAKTOSTRONG TRANSMIGRATION ISEKAI

    Ajax is one of many people who was dealt a poor hand at life and yet tries to make the best out of his situation. However, going into his late teens he finds himself struggling financially and leading a self-destructive lifestyle. Running low on hope for the future he meets a sudden and unfortunate end to his short-lived life but unexpectedly wakes up in a mysterious yet familiar world. ******** Hello, I'm sorry to inform you that this novel has been dropped. I'm sorry to anyone who was reading this but I was not able to balance writing with my academics. Please feel free to read the novel, but there will not be any more updates.

    53 Chs 7 お気に入り