Great first chapter :) I would recommend splitting the opening paragraph into smaller ones
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Wonderful is all I can say! My review might be impacted by the fact that I know the author personally but I will still be shameless with it! I’m making this review after the 11th chapter and all I can say is wow! The author has managed to fit a summary of the world, power system, introduce important figures and even create an important event without it feelings jumbled up! I already love the mc and there are certain characters I can’t wait to see more of. The author’s writing quality is also superb and I’ve learnt a bit from him just by reading. All in all I definitely recommend this read, worth the 5 stars[img=Good night]
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Chenai kinda sus ngl
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Correction : “Sure” is missing here
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Correction : Arena
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Correction : I assume it’s supposed to be that he is “Not” interested, and make it magnetic presence of the “Young man” not “Boy”
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Correction : there is a double “The” here
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Correction needed : two typos here for beautiful and the
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I already have some plans for that ;)
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original The Path to Genesis
The Path to Genesis is no longer updating on WN. To access more info on where to read, click on the last chapter posted ( Ch 21 ) "…Do not let yourself fade into grey..." A statement of warning belonging to an innocent teenager with but a humble goal: protecting his family, putting his guardian to rest, repaying past debts, and living a life surrounded by the joy of nature and music. …But also a teenager who doesn’t know exactly how dark and grim the world beneath the morning is; a world which welcomes him openly as its long-lost son. In a world bordered between purity and corruption, Elias Nor challenges the secrets hidden within its depths and shows the journey of a humble pawn's path to its very beginning—a path amidst blood, sweat, and tears.21 Chs 188 お気に入り
Making this review after finishing the 7th chapter er and honestly I’m impressed :) the Author knows how to captivate an audience from the start and I’m interesting in seeing where the story leads us to