William_Dante

William_Dante

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2022-12-20 入りました Global
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William_Dante
1 years ago
Commented

It’s amazing story but please would you let the bad people have superpower I don’t want you to limit yourself I don’t know where is the story going but for example what would happen if there’s a chance you can make a big war good vs bad but you can do it because you didn’t give the bad people power Maybe in the future the government will get angry at the MC and you can make a lot of chapter from that And I truly believe if you have superpower in you can protect yourself then what’s the point of having a super power[img=update][img=update][img=recommend]

William_Dante
William_Dante
1 years ago
Posted

It’s amazing story, but I see a problem almost every chapter. You have to make movies so can you please add the audience reaction so the story can be longer I don’t want this novel to finish too quickly

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William_Dante
William_Dante
1 years ago
Commented

What is the point of bringing this deadly weapon in this world just bring nuclear bomb Next chapter in the story will finish please don’t bring this weapons in the story it will be meaningless

William_Dante
William_Dante
1 years ago
Commented

Mc need to have some connection in the real world so what if you make the MC act like an avatar say he grinned me this power in return I will make a business for him once that’s done and he will have fun with his girlfriend maybe he will save Tony Stark from the poison and Tony Stark would become a strong ally we all know the timeline is messed up so he need a strong allies once the maybe he will make a spaceship and go to different planet and share the game so he can make a lot of money

William_Dante
William_Dante
1 years ago
Posted

It’s amazing please keep updating 10/8👍👍👍👍👍✌️✌️✌️✌️👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍