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Here's an obligatory 5-star review of my story. I will be posting at least one chapter per day on this novel. Hope you can also check on my stories at ToodatFiction if you want advanced chapter reading.

I am a fan of Omniscient Reader's Viewpoint, so I was a bit hesitant to read this story at first. From the first few chapters, I would guess that the author believes the relationship between Kim Dokja and Yoo Joonghyuk in the original novel hasn't been completely explored, thus their relationship became the core of this novel. The exchanges between the two characters create a dynamic that naturally evolves. It is a blend of tension, humor, and even support, which shows the complexities and difficulties of building relationships online. The author uses a minimalist and direct style of narration, where the dialogue and short comments help advance the plot. The pacing is steady, maintaining engagement without overwhelming readers with technical details. However, for those who haven't read the original story, you may feel lost since there's not enough description of the characters' backgrounds. Because it is centered on dialogue and comments, you won't get a complete feel for their surroundings. Sometimes, it feels like two heads having a conversation. Nonetheless, the author's writing style is accessible, which will make this story appeal to most online readers. Great job!

I don't usually read science fiction, but I decided to give it a try, and I couldn't be happier. World-building comes with rich descriptions. The author was successful in painting a picture of a universe ravaged by cosmic warfare. The MC, Fenrir is a complex character depicted with a perfect mix of primal instinct and a sense of loss. The action is intense and well-paced. particularly in the confrontation scenes. All in all, this book promises an epic journey for fans of science fiction and fantasy alike.

A short glimpse first: the story is set in a futuristic society divided into factions based on unique abilities: Magi-Humans, Mutant Humans, and Techno-Humans. The story begins with detailed files on key individuals, which sets the stage for a conflict-laden narrative centered around power struggles and societal hierarchies. The writing style is rich, detailed, and immersive. It primarily focuses on world-building and character development. The clear introduction of the characters makes it easy for readers to understand the power dynamics and the complexities of the relationships. There are enough introspective moments and battle scenes. However, the rich details may affect the pacing of the story, which might impact the reader's momentum (for me, I prefer this type of narration). Some dialogues, especially during confrontations, feel a bit expository. These are just small adjustments, but the story is already good.

How do I start this review? Apart from being a Yuri, this is a dark fantasy/psychological story. The opening narrative of the story gives a hint about the existential struggle that Nadia was experiencing with a malevolent force. This helps set the tone of the story. With the characterization of Nadia, the author was successful in making it shine. The author was able to highlight her resilience and internal conflict. Her struggle with the inner voice puts a question on her autonomy tho. The setting is a bit sparse but still effective. it was able to amplify the suspenseful and eerie ambiance of the story. As aforementioned, the narrative is a strong part of the story, but there are instances when it becomes a limitation. Still too early for me to tell, but since it is a fast-paced type of story, some elements perhaps become underdeveloped. A good read!

The start is quite intense. It was emotionally driven. The opening is strong, and gripping, and sets a dark and heavy tone for the narrative. The author was sensitive in portraying the character's emotional turmoil and desperation. Nonetheless, this can still feel somewhat jarring to some readers, but it is necessary to set the stage for the emotional oscillations to follow. I also believe that showcasing the school life of the character is smart. It explores the protagonist's contrasting public persona versus her private struggles. It highlights how people with mental health can appear very differently on the surface. Chapter after chapter the tension grows higher. Layers and layers of conflict have been added. IMO, the story is quite engaging and will encourage the readers to invest in the journey of the protagonist. However, there are instances when it feels melodramatic. Also, the dialogue part sometimes veers toward being 'on-the-nose' which may affect the potential realism of the story. Still, I love several aspects of this story, especially the 1st person POV which allows the readers to look deeply into the feelings and thoughts of the character. The exploration of the conflicts and the mental health of the character is done with raw intensity. This is not the usual story that you will encounter here on this platform, but I suggest you give it a chance.

This story is more like a supernatural saga. I suddenly remember the Mercy Thompson Series after the first few chapters. It doesn't simply use the popular tropes that we will often encounter in werewolf/vampire stories. It comes with the history and politics of wolf shifters and a society that has learned from human strategies allowing them to foster a semblance of peace and order. The hook was effective. It did not just highlight the elements of fantasy. It comes with a critique of societal evolution. The lore that pertains to that historical shift is well-crafted. However, the pacing of the chapter is done quite leisurely, which could be a challenge to some readers. For instance, readers may not necessarily be clearly aware of what is at stake during the first few chapters. Still, the way that the author creates a sense of mystery and anticipation is very effective. It's just that there might be some moments when the narrative will benefit more from direct narration rather than being atmospheric or descriptive. Overall, this is a great story.